The story's not bad. I'm just not really into the whole cliche high school drama/love stories. I would suggest adding more detail, using more descriptive word, like looking in a thesaurus or something, and going a little bit slower, to build suspense. It seems as though the story is moving kind of fast. Also, be careful with your tenses. It's past tense, right? Because you switch over to present tense at times. ^.^ But overall, the story's good. Bump!
To clarify: 1) I decided to write in the present tense from now on. I've alway had issues with that, but I figured it would be good practice! 2) This is my first story, so I don't think I should be expected of having perfect grammar, correct spelling, and complex word choice. I try to use language people understand because the little details in the story matter. 3) There is too much to cover in this story, so if I move at a quick pace, I'm sorry. These events are minuscule ones leading into one huge important event. 4) Even though, it's all minor, junior high romance, there are other parts of the story too. It will all come together later, much later, but in the meantime and probably all the way to Chapter 50, it will have romance.
Well, I think everyone thinks it's a romance/drama story because basically all that's happened is romance/drama. So, if it's not, then I would suggest adding the non-romance/drama part soon. ^.^