The Tragedy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Feb 2, 2013.

  1. **NOTE**

    I apologize in advance for any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors that may pop up in the updates to come.

    Thank you,

    May
     
  2. xD I jusy realized in the update the cousins name is Falicity not Ally!
    Please excuse that!
     
  3. Amazing job may keep it up
     
  4. Found this and decided if read it. I made a wonderful choice.  it. Keep going! Bumpdate!
     
  5. This is amazing May
     
  6. Omg this is great!
     
  7. Keep it comming, even though mine is clearly better ^_^
     
  8. Oh shut up Tj -.- its not a competition... If you want a competition then you've already lost with your confusing story
     
  9. bump my love bump!! 
     
  10. Dj, I like May's better than yours. So shut up.
    Keep up the good work May
     
  11. Dude I was joking calm down
     
  12. First on pg4 Haha
     
  13. Updating in a hour ^-^
     
  14.  Two hours passed
     
  15. Update
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    I was so confused. All I said was my name to these kids and now they're being mean to me. The only nice one is Eve. She came to cheer me up while all the others made fun of me calling me a big baby. But, they hurt my feelings and a boy wouldn't stop pulling my hair. What do you expect from a 5 year old new girl who knows nothing about her classmates? You'd expect her to
    be upset and cry right?

    Anyways, my brother had only come to check on me. I didn't want him to leave. I wanted him here to keep me out of harms way. But, thats just wants. Doesn't mean I'll actually fer it. Thats what happens when you want right? You want and want but never get. It's just a bunch of crap. Like why want something you know you'll never get. It's pointless in my opinion. But, it's human nature to want certain things then having a 50/50 chance of getting it.

    "I'll see you after school Mina." Isaac was walking out my classroom door.

    "Otay Isaac."

    I couldn't help but feel sad seeing my brother go. I faced the other kids, walking back to my desk. It was free time so kids were playing with the toys and coloring. I sat by myself coloring a flower, someone had come behind me and snatching my coloring page from me and tore it up in fromt of me. It wad Leslie Rodriguez.

    "Haha Mina! Nobody likes you here get out of our class!"

    "But...But I didn't do anything!"

    Leslie's eyes grew with hatred. She stepped closer to me and pulled me out of my chair. It was at that moment when I realized that I was the scrawniest and smallest of the class. And when Leslie wouldn't stop pulling my hair and pushing my into the small bookshelf that was almost as tall as me, I realized what was happening. Bullying was happening and I had no clue how to stop it. I tried fighting back, but her friend Elizabeth jumped in it and started hitting me. I tried my best to pry out of their grip. I kicked and kicked until my foot connected forcefully with Elizabeth's jaw. Thats when the other girl's jumped in it. Eve tried to stop it, but that didnt help. It was already to late. The class was the predator and I was their prey.
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    Poor Mina
     
  16. I would beat the shit out of those kindergarten girls.. Not Mina though. Or Eve. Just fucking everybody else
     
  17. May this story is Great keep up the good work (\^•^/)