Rose POV: I hate him. He's immature Cave's POV: I hate her. She's rude Rose POV: He's completely retarded, he doesn't even know what 2 2 is. Cave POV: She's really stupid, she says I don't know what 2 2 is. It's 6...right? Rose POV: He's not attractive AT ALL! No matter how many times he shows me his abs. Cave POV: She's more sporty then girly. I like a girl who wears skirts, so I can...you know...whatever. Rose POV: He's a player. Cave POV: She's a confusing chick. Rose POV: And I will Cave POV: NEVER. Rose POV: EVER. Cave POV: EVER Both POV: Date then.
Jordan, I think she made it like that for a cliffhanger. The next part will be an explanation. This is amazing
Rose POV: I stand in line behind another girl as we wait for the other team to finish. Ahhh, basketball in the morning. I love it. The smell of sweat and blood. Today were doing three on three. You go on the court and plat three on three, if you win, you go down the court and play the other team. I do a quick glance at the two players I'll be playing with, my eyes connect with Jordan's and I smile. Me and Jordan are the two super players of the team. Separated from each other, were just good, but together, were great. The three girls in front of me take their place, after a few minutes, they lose and step off the court. Our turn to win. I take my spot in the front, so I can guard the person who has the ball. As soon as the team wins, they turn around and come our way. My eyes lock with the girl I'm guarding, my enemy, I might add. Her names Faith, I call her the devil. She walks toward us slow, and I even count how many times the ball hits the floor before she reaches us. 17. Instantly I know her style, slow and always thinking. My style is to guard my person like I'm glued to them and to get the ball out of their hand. As soon as she reaches me, she goes to my right, I cut her off, she drives my left, but I move with her. So she picks up the ball, wanting to pass to another player. My hands go up and I wave them around, trying to steal the ball. I watch her to see who's going to give the ball too, at first her body doesn't give nothing away, then I watch her eyes as they lock with someone on the right. She tries to throw it to them, but my hand shots out, and before you know it, I'm down the court with a perfect layup. Life is so sweet to me. **After Practice** I walk down the school hallways, I'm late. Someone took my clothes out of my bag (Faith, I'm guessing), and hid them in one of the un-used lockers, I was pissed, of course. So here I am, storming down the hallway, this wouldn't be the first time this happened, and sadly my english teacher isn't one for excuses. Turning the corner, I run straight into someone. We collide, and he lands straight on top of me. I can tell it's a guy because of his grunt. I keep my eyes closed for a second, I have a horrible headache now, not to mention Faith elbowed me in practice after we beat her. "Rose?" Cave says, surprise in his voice. I wrinkle up my nose at his voice. "Ew, please get off of me" I say, keeping my eyes closed. "Why?...You like this position?" He says, and I can tell by his voice, that he's smirking. My eyes fly open and I try my best to push him off of me. He's a football, basketball, and track, all of my favorite sports. Sadly, I'm not tougher then him, and he just locks his arms around me, grinning. "Awww, poor Rosey, can't get me off of her" he jokes in a sing-song voice. "Are you freaking serious! Cave g-" "HEY! What's going on here! You are not suppose to be on her like that! And Rose I expected more from you! You are NOT allowed to do that on school property!" Ms. Valentine says, as she marches over here. Goddamn it! Now I'm in trouble. Cave climbs off of me, and offers me a hand. I roll me eyes and get up by myself. "Ms. Valentine, I di-" "Save it Rose. Both of you follow me, I'm taking you both to class." *** Once we reach our class (me and Cave have the same class), Ms. Valentine escorts us in. "They were making out in the hallway when I found them Ms. Ice" Ms. Valentine says. What the...fudge! We weren't making out! I look over the class to see their gazes on me. I clench my teeth and look out the window. After a few more words, Ms. Valentine leaves and Ms. Ice turns to us, her cold gaze making me want to curl up in a ball. "So...making out on school property was what you guys have been doing this whole year every time you guys are late." She says slowly, and I can't help but to glare out the window. Luckily, Cave also keeps his mouth shut. "Sit!" She says, giving us both a icy glare. It could have been worse. Then I glance around me to find everyone staring at me and Cave. Wait, no, it is worse. I just "made-out" with Cave. Life hates me. Sorry if spelling or grammar mistakes, got to go to school
I really liked the first update- original brilliance. Um description (surroundings, feelings and appearance) and just remember the apostrophe in 'we're' otherwise its were xD. Also when you said 'why?…' it should have been why…? okay? thats pretty much it butI really like it!
Cave POV: This is stupid, I like her but I'm pretending to hate her, is that even possible? I glance over at her and look at her. Her long black hair slightly damp from practice, her brown eyes focused on the board. Then she turns her head and looks at me. I try me best to smile. Wait! No! I'm suppose to hate her! Quickly I turn away. God, I'm a idiot. "Cave! Answer the question!" Ms. Ice yells at me. I frown and look up at the board. The questions ask that if you were a character in a book, who would you be? "I would like to be a superhero...so I guess Superman." I answer, looking at the teacher. Some people laugh at this, and I look around, It wasn't meant to be funny. "Why would you like to be...Superman Cave" she asks, giving me a bored look. I frown again, and think, then I smile. "So I could save people, without hurting myself. Or because I could fly and maybe even touch the clouds. Also because...well..superhero's always get the girl in the end. " I say, looking down. Everyone laughs, and I hear some guys agreeing with me. I glance over Rose and see her looking my way. Guess what she's doing, SMILING! I grin, maybe I should dress up as a super hero just to make her laugh. "Settle down class!" Ms. Ice says, and everyone goes quiet. She looks at me and nods, then she continues the lesson. My eyes keep floating over to Rose, she was no longer looking at me, but at the board. Maybe I didn't have to pretend to hate her, maybe I could just...tell her, or at least talk to her. Yes, that's what I'm going to do, I'm to talk to her. Wait...what if she rejects me. Ugh! Why can't life be easy! Suddenly, the bell rings, loud and annoying. Grabbing my stuff, I push through people, and finally I reach her, she's putting her stuff in her bag. "Hey Rose" I say, giving her a charming smile, well, at least what I think is a charming smile. She looks up at me, and a surprise look crosses her face. "What?" She asks. I start panicking and search my mind for an answer. "I-my basketball skills need some help and I don't want to tell the guys, they might, you know, think I'm weak or something. So I was wondering, can you, I don't know, help me?" I say, running a hand through my hair. She frowns for a second and I start to panic. "Ok, but only because I want our team to win." She says, then she leaves. I swear I just had a mini heart attack, did she just say yes? Sweet! Wait no, I'm a beast at basketball, and I don't want to lie to her. Why can't like be easy! Sorry if mistakes, gotta go to school!