"J..Jay wait for me!I shouted at him.He stopped in his tracks and slowly faced me.His hazel eyes were emotionless,but I could still see a glint of concern to me.
Just to point out. You should start your fic off with a beginning instead of just jumping in. First chapter should have more than one paragraph. You need a title to your story also. Check your grammar as well.
Always a space after punctuation, and how can eyes be showing concern yet be emotionless at the same time? The description is good, but please try to be careful and make sure to edit.