Welcome to RockWood

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Treasure-, Feb 4, 2013.

  1. I am not that good of a writer. Please leave feedback so I can improve my writing. Thanks.
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    Here in RockWood, There is no normal people. Everyone is crazy or mentally ill. It wasn't always like this.

    "Addison, Bed time." My dad said as he flicked my bedroom lights off.

    "But Dad!" I Put down my book and gave him puppy dog eyes.

    "No but's. Bed time. Now." He left the room.

    I put my book on my night stand, set my alarm clock, and Crawled under my blankets.

    A light turns on from across the street. I sat up and stared at it. The Anderson's house. Molly and Derek Anderson. Funny how they are never seen. A few years ago there was a Terrible fire at their house. They lost both their Sons. They went insane after that.

    BOOM!

    I rushed out of my room and to my dads.

    "Dad?!" I said with panic.

    "Dad, where are you?"

    I searched his room and the rest of the house. I looked in the whole house. Everywhere except Charlotte's room.

    I walked slowly to her room, unlocked the door, and opened it slowly.

    "Hey Charlotte..." I entered the room.
    "Have you seen Daddy?" I continued.

    "Omg. Ew. Ew. Ew." I said realizing I just stepped in something. I looked down at my feet and I screamed in horror.
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    I'll try to update often.
     
  2. Ohhhh I like 
     
  3. Update.
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    Charlotte glared at me. I stepped on a dead Rat. I moved away from it and to Charlotte.

    "Hey, where's daddy?" I spoke calmly to Charlotte.

    "He ran outside." she had a blank expression on her face.

    6 months ago Charlotte attempted to commit suicide. She jumped out the floor window. She hit her head on a rock and now is Mentally Retarded. She's 12 but now thinks she is 7.

    I left her room and went out outside with a flash light.

    "Dad?" I called out into the darkness.

    I left the front Porch and went to the end of the drive way.

    "Dad, Where are you?" I yelled out louder several times.

    I walked on the sidewalk down the road. My neighborhood is old. The houses are spread out. Woods surround the neighborhood.

    I fell to the ground face first. Something hit the back of my knee hard. I sat up and looked behind me down the road.
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    Where's her Dad?
     
  4. UPDATE!
     
  5. I'll Notify you when I update by posting on your wall. 
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    A car came speeding from down the road. I looked beside me on the road. A can of beer was thrown at my legs.
    The car zipped pass, creating a wave of the rain water on the road. I was soaked. The radio was blasting music from the car. In seconds it was gone.

    I got up and headed into the woods. Maybe I would find dad there.

    I got deep into the woods. I heard a whoosh coming from behind me. I turned around quickly. The sound started circling me. I was spinning in circles trying to determine what it was. A white figure kept flying around me. It got closer and closer me. I shut my eyes tight, trying to block it out. Maybe it wasn't real. Maybe I was imagining it.

    "ADDISON!" a voice called out from the darkness.

    I opened my eyes and looked around Looking for the Person the voice belonged too. The White figure had disappeared.

    A felt a poke on my shoulder. I spun around and prepared myself for getting hurt.

    "Adi, Cool it. It's just me." Jed said with a smirk.

    "I'm so glad to see you." I gave him a hug. He hugged me back. I smiled when I felt his warm Embrace.

    "What are you doing out here?" Jed said with a puzzled expression.

    I pulled away from him.

    "Looking for my dad. The was a loud noise and he disappeared."

    "But you're soaking wet"

    "Yeah. Some jerks were speeding past m-"

    Before I could finish my sentence. The white figure grabbed him and flew deeper into the forest. Not a sound was coming out of Jed.

    I ran after them a quick as I could. My heart was racing and so many pictures were flying through my mind.

    Just then I a felt a tug on my shirt.
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    Omg. This Girl must be scared out of her mind 
     
  6.  sooo good 
     
  7. Its very awesome
     
  8. I'm happy to hear that you all like it!
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    I stopped running and turned around.
    My face froze with shock.

    It was Jed. How did he get there? I was just running after him.

    I looked back to the direction I was running and then back at Jed.

    "What's wrong?" he said with a polite smile.

    What was he? Was I even chasing him?

    "Uh... Nothing." I scratched my head.

    "You just darted off. What's with you?"

    I did respond. I just started walking back to my house. Jed caught up to me and held my hand. I felt a bolt of electricity run through my veins. He's different. We aren't an item. We are only friend's. We just met this year. He's new to RockWood.

    He walked me to my front door.

    "Thanks for walking me home." i smiled.

    "No problem."he stuck his hands into his pockets.

    "Hey... I uh.... Need to tell you something tomorrow. Could we met up?" he continued

    "Sure." I went Inside and shut the door. Right there standing in front of me was my Dad.
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    "Dad!" I said with shock.
    "How..? Where? What?" I continued. Slid down the door and sat on the floor, still wet.

    "I got trapped in my closet. Something fell on the Handle and locked me in."

    "I went looking for you..." I was so confused. I got up and went to the bathroom. I got everything I needed to shower. I set down my stuff on the counter and went to turn on the water.

    I screamed as loud as I could as I looked into the tub.
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    This is really fun to write. 
     
  9. AHHH THE SUSPENSE 
     
  10. This is getting really crazy. It's not gonna be a long story though.  BUT I am writing a new story called "Changing" it's coming soon. I'll notify you when it's up.
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    There was a rat. I left the bathroom getting really upset. I laid in my bed when I heard a knocking on my window.

    Nancy was there Waving at me through the window.
    I opened the window and let her in.

    "Heyy Adi!" she fixed the black beanie on her head and pushed her Ray ban black glasses back up her nose.

    "What's up Nancy?" I sat on my bed.

    "So, you know Key?" she was excited and started pacing around my room.

    "The Korean kid?"

    "Mmhm!!! Guess what?"

    "what?"

    "He Asked me out!!" She smiled widely and jumped up and down.

    "Lucky. No boy romance stuff for me. But you know Jed? The new kid, he held my hand"

    "Awww!!! How cute!"

    "Yeah. The only good thing that's happened to me tonight. It's really creepy lately. Ever since Anne Claire showed up all this scary stuff is happening."

    "Scary? We live in a scary town. Almost everyone in this town has something wrong with their head"

    "Well, yeah. But, Uh... Nevermind."

    Nancy sat beside me.

    "I want full details on Jed."

    "Alright alright.."
    I began telling her what happened.

    "And so finally he told me that he needed to tell me something important tomorrow."
    I finished.

    There was a soft knocking on my door.
     
  11.  Im so excited
     
  12. Lol, this story is so crazy. 
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    I opened the door. There was Charlotte Holding her teddy bear.

    "Adi, Someone is on the phone for you." she handed me the house phone and walked off.

    "Hello?" I spoke into the phone.

    Nancy came up and put her ear on the back of the phone trying to listen in.

    "We've been Watching you. It seems like you're having some trouble."
    A Foggy voice spoke from the phone.

    "You should be-" I hung up before the person could finish speaking. I dropped the phone onto the bed.

    Nancy gave me a shocked look.
    "Who was that?" she asked.

    "How do I know?" I responded

    "Well, your little Sister is scaring me!" She made a funny face. I laughed.

    "I'm out, Chick!" she made a peace sign with her fingers and Climbed out the window.

    "Call me and give me the deets about Jed." she said before running off.

    I shut the window and laid back in bed.

    A few hours pass. I caught myself staring at the wall wondering what had happened tonight. It was crazy that all this stuffed happened all together.

    The phone rang.

    "Hello?" I answered the phone.

    "You have a surprise waiting at your back door." the same foggy voice from before said. The person hung up.

    I looked at my clock. It read 1:37am.

    I got out of bed and went to the back door. I turned on the porch light and opened the door.

    I looked around outside and then looked down. I gasped.
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    What's there?
     
  13. I'm getting scared.. BUT THIS IS SO GOOD 
     
  14. Keep it coming aka BUMP!!!
     
  15. Bummmmmp your better at writing then me