Broken

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iSassBendAndSnapToBreakNoses, Jan 19, 2013.

  1. Oh no!!! Priscilla cousin! Why?? Bump!
     
  2. Bump!! NOOO HE IS EVIL!!! Lol
     
  3. Great another guy for priscillas mom to mind control lol
     
  4. I didnt mean to make him fall in love with priscilla but get him away from rose lol
     
  5. Hmmm  this whole boy thing is confusing until she turns 16  It's a long way
     
  6. Bump! You didn't wall me...
     
  7. Sorry  Ahh. Can you all post on my wall if you want updates? Easier than going back a billion pages.. Actually.. Follow me! I'll send you a message. I'm writing the next update right now! 
     
  8. Chapter 11

    I had a feeling Algebra would be the worst class of the day. I had Noah, my best friend, Jeremy, the guy I think I like, and Priscilla, his evil cousin.

    "Hey Rosey, where were you today? You weren't in band and woah," he says then looking at my forehead, "Are you okay?! What happened?"

    "I'm fine, Noah! I'm just clumsy. I ran into the metal frame of a door. Thankfully, Jeremy was there," I say with a smile, trying not to blush.

    "Jeremy?"

    "He's new here and very sweet, but there's something about him-" I start to say.

    "Hey Rosalie," Jeremy waves walking into the room with Priscilla.

    I whisper to Noah, "They're cousins."

    "Nice going, Rose," he smirks.

    Jeremy walks over to where me and Noah sit, "Hi! I'm Jeremy, nice to meet you!"

    "S'up, the name's Noah."

    "You all know Priscilla right?" Jeremy asks.

    Me and Noah look at each other, mumble a yes while gritting our teeth. The bell finally rings and thankfully, Priscilla sat on the other side of the room. She have me an icy glare and then flipped her hair. I didn't pay attention to the whole lesson. I just thought about Jeremy; how perfect he was with that smile, hair, and laugh. Priscilla couldn't steal him away; that'd be pretty gross. I'm glad they're related actually.

    The guy behind me, Steve, and huge nerd with mountains of acne taps my shoulder and hands me a note written on a sheet of notebook paper.

    The note read:
    Hey, I just met you.
    And this is crazy.
    But I really like you.
    So will you date me?

    Sincerely,
    Jeremy

    He just asked me out! AHHHH!! A super corny but super adorable way! I wonder how Priscilla will "handle" this now! I feel so evil.

    After class, Jeremy waited for me in the hallway to talk to me.

    "Hey," he says, "did you uhm get my note?"

    "Yes, and yes," I respond smiling widely.

    "You will? Are you available tonight to watch movie," he asks nervously.

    "I think I'm free! How's 6PM?"

    "Great! See you, Rose. I'll be waiting for tonight."

    Priscilla walks up and links her arm into his, dragging him by her side. While walking away, she turned back at me and gave me a devilish smile. Something was going to happen...









    But. I didn't know. What.

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    I got ready for tonight once I got back from school. My parents iweren't too happy about my new love interest, but that wouldn't stop me. I showered, shampooing twice, and straightened my hair. I threw all my clothes over the bed with frustration not being able to choose an outfit. I was dressed in bathrobe with my fuzzy slippers. I text Dana, Ivy, Ashlynn, Addy, and Brielle to come over and help me.

    DANA: SORRY GURLL. I HAVE FAMILY OVER.

    IVY: I SO WOULD! BUT I'M GETTING EXTRA HELP. LOVE YOU 

    ASHLYNN: I'VE GOT A CRAP AMOUNT OF HOMEWORK.

    ADDY: I HAVE ART CLUB ASDFGHJKL.

    BRIELLE: I'M GROUNDED REMEMBER?!?!

    All my hopes were gone. I couldn't do this alone!

    Knock knock.

    I open my door and see no one there.

    Hmmm. I thought to myself. Am I just dreaming?

    Knock knock knock.

    Where is that coming from?!?!?!

    Oh wait...



















    The window.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sort of long update . I'm writing the next one right now! I'll try posting it real soon! Remember to follow me for updates .
     
  9. Love it:) long updates are good:)
     
  10. Bump! I don't trust Jeremy...
     
  11. Bump!!! :D could you write on my wall about updates please???? 
     
  12. Olivia, can I message you? 
     
  13. Bump me likey
     
  14. Thank yew everyone for the support 