Special

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GP-TheNerdyOne, Jan 20, 2013.

  1. I can't believe I have the nerve to start another story.
    Goldialocks scares me.
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    I blinked back my tears. My letter fell from my hand.
    He was dead
    I slid down the wall, I no longer have anything to live for.
    I don't even want to look at the letter, which contains some words he wrote.
    Before he died.

    Alison,
    You're sad. I can tell. I don't like seeing you sad, it breaks my heart. But forget about him. You'll find another guy. I know when I'm gone I'll never get to see your beautiful smile again. I'll never see the green eyes that has kept me up all night. I'll never see your caramel hair that has a power over me.
    I love you, but I know that you don't love me.
    Goodbye,
    William


    Why? Why is it always me? I hung my head down, and I feel the soft breeze ripple through my hair. I wrapped my jacket around me more tightly, the way I would always do.
    God made a huge mistake creating me.
    But then I guess I'm special, in a way
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    Leave all the hate you want.
    I don't really care
     
  2. I'm missing a lot of places where there should be periods.
    Oops
     
  3. It's good?
     
  4. Wall me if you want me to be in it. I don't have any names right now
     
  5. Hopefully this is gonna turn out good. I don't know, I just write as I go.
    That rhymes
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    Shay's POV
    I traced my finger against the cold, hard wall. My blonde hair found its way to my mouth. I brushed it away, angrily.
    I felt mad at him, and Alison. William made me promise not to tell a word to anyone that he wasn't dead. He wanted to stay away from Alison until I get enough information of how much she likes him. He's using you, said a voice inside my head. I shook my head. I didn't want to believe it, but I knew it was true.

    Let me tell you a story.

    9th GRADE
    I strolled down the hallway. My footsteps echoed through the building. This is it, I thought. I'll get pummeled, I'll die. I was about to get beaten up by the biggest school bully. I was about to enter the World Of Doom when somebody grabbed me from behind.
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    Sorry Shay, change of plans Tell me what you think guys
     
  6. so far so good
     
  7. Bump, it's really good! I love my character!
     
  8. Your character will be surprising Shay