New Girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *re8ba (01), Jan 19, 2013.

  1. Hope you guys like it this is my first one so here it goes
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    New girl, those dreaded words that came every year. No one ever asked me if i ever wanted to be one but same,old, same, old.

    The last place we were at was Montana and I hated every bit of it.
     
  2. Sorry about that

    Now we are in Wisconsin and the cities should be called ghost towns. The only place we moved to that i liked was New York. All the buildings, all the cities, I wish we could have stayed

    The reasons we move are always work. We never stay anywhere for more than a year.
     
  3. Now this town I'm in feels like it should be called get-away-a-ton and not Allenton. The only thing good about this condo , is that there is a Subway near-by. Even though we live in Allenton, I still have to go to a different school in West Bend 'cause my mom wants me to go to a good school.

    When I finally get there , it's like no one even wants to know me, so I just go with it. When I get back home I realise something where is my mom and my dad?
     
  4. They are always home when i get home no matter what!!! Somethings wrong, I know it!

    I checked everywhere and I couldn't find them. The only thing I found was a note saying" Hey New girl, sorry about your parents, I needed them for something, so don't expect them to come back. EVER!" , and that's when I knew I had to find them.
     
  5. The only things on my were , how to get my parents back, and who is that guy who wrote the note.

    The only way I would ever find out, is by having help.

    My friends from my old school weren't going to help at all , so I think now's the time to make some new one's , one's that are brave and can take of their selves.
     
  6. That first sentance was suppose to be , The only things on my mind were
     
  7. The next day at school , the only kids who didn't ignore me were the kids who I asked to be friend. I told them all the plan and they all agreed, turns out one of them had the same encounter and wanted revenge.

    After school, we all met at my house, since that was the only place to find evidence. Turns out he knew we were going to try and find out what happened so he left another note. That one said " If your really going to try and stop me, dont or the consiquentes
     
  8. will be severe"
     
  9. Sounds great so far.
     
  10. "Are we really going to let that get in are way!?!? Kyrsten, she is the most determined person I know and my friend whos parents suffered what mine are going through now. "But what if this is literal??? That was Rebecca, brave and yet sometimes freaked out and scared but thats rare. "I agree with Rebecca on this."This is Megan, a weird messed-up girl who is crazy and creepy. "We shouldn't try to solve this." "You guys we are going through with this no matter what!" This is me Sabrina another weird girl in this group who can be crazy when she wants to and normal and determined when ever else.


    If u think their should be more characters say yes if not say no.
     
  11. Oh my gosh thank you thank you thank!!!! These is awesome I love it. Megans was funny
     
  12. No I think this is ok. Not many not to little
     
  13. "Ok then, whats the plan???Rebecca asked. "We keep meddling until he leaves another note, I replied. "What if he doesn't Sabrina, then what?? "Megan, he is totally leaving another note, I said ,"and if he doesn't welll we are on our own.

    "And do you really think he won't leave another note Megan?? said Kyrsten. "I guess you guys are right" "Great now we are all on the same page, right? "Yep! "Sure! "I guess so."
     
  14. I like it re
     
  15. ty for ppl who read this and like
     
  16. And sure enough there was another note. This one said, " I know you want to meddle but you little girls don't know how dangerous I am , and I'm sure I can take care of a bunch of school girls while you can't even take care of a little mystery ." By: the unknown

    "Well, now we know what he calls himself, I told you guys this was a good idea, I said. But we still don't know anything about this guy except by what Kysten says about him, Megan replied. "And that is why we have the internet Meg,said Rebecca.

    "The only thing on here about him saids that he takes people away and when he's done with them, welll, let's just say , they don't get seen again.", Kysten says. "Sooo he takes and then gets rid of them??? Megan replies. "Yes, Kysten replied.
     
  17. If anyone reads this story please give me feed-back or i will probably stop writing this story and start a new one