Thanks my pupil.... people think it's just a plain story what they do not know is it's a real story and still in the making..... It's more of I write as it happens.... I'm trying to catch up on what is happening as of now... so just as you know people it's a real life story
Don't misuse ellipses. There are existing things such as periods and commas. If you want to make it sound more ominous, I suggest using only a few ellipses and more adjectives to create that aura. If not, then I do not know the hell you're trying to aim for. Good luck.
It's a love story. Thats what they are trying to aim for. Why would they want it to be ominous? If you don't like it you don't have to read it. You also don't have to right negative comments, theres no need for it.
Hey its a forum on a game not English class and I like it a lot haters gonna hate lovers gonna love so bye haters
I agree… maybe ninja just want to write and share… what if ninja is no writer does it mean ninja can no longer write??
I think that would be a sad day to prevent someone from doing something that wasn't their profession.