P R O M I S E S

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GP-TheNerdyOne, Dec 29, 2012.

  1. I WANNA READ IT!!! DONT STOP OR I'LL STOP WRITING MY STORIES TOO 
     
  2. YEAH! WHAT THEY SAID! I'LL CLOSE MY STORY IF YOU STOP!
     

  3. You're all teaming up against me. I'm hurt
     
  4. Hehe Love you Amanda

    Btw... Its May (xXSimply_MeXx) this is my alt 0.0
     
  5. You should feel flattered we love this so much
     
  6. I'm so sorry guys!
    Oh my god, I'm terrible
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    Justin's POV
    She released me from the kiss. I stared at her, and for several seconds I did that. But then the bell had to ring. Of course! Ugh, fuck you bell.
    Sapphire must've known what I was thinking because she giggled and lightly punched me on the shoulder. I stood there, while she walked away into the building. Then Ryan came running up to me, the wind almost knocking me over.
    "Bro, was that Sapphire?" He asked, through deep breaths.

    "Yeah, why?" I stared at him, I bet I made him feel awkward. Score!

    "How did you get her back?"

    I was quiet for a moment. How exactly did I get her back? By a necklace...
    Oh.
    Oh.
    OH.
     
  7.  I know you guys might hate me for this, but I like Aly better than Sapphire.
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    Aly's POV
    I cried. Yes, I, Aly Banovic cried. There was only one thing in my life that could calm me down. I went inside the lifeless music room and picked up a guitar. I played around with it a bit before I could find the notes. Then I began to sing:

    When I was younger I saw
    My daddy cry, and curse at the wind.
    He broke his own heart and I watched,
    As he tried to reassemble it


    And my momma swore,
    She would, never let her,
    Self forget
    And that was the day,
    I swore,
    That I would not sing of love,
    If it does not exist..


    But darling you are,
    The only exception,
    You are,
    The only exception....


    I put all my sadness, my angriness into singing. My voice rang out in the room. But somebody came in...



    "Aly?"
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    So.. Do you guys like it?
     
  8. BUMP!!! AMANDA BUMP!!!!!!
     
  9. keep it coming
     
  10. I have news!
    xXSimply_MeXx is now working with me on the story!
     
  11. Nice this should get interesting (i mean it in a good way)
     
  12. I'll update now
    Oh, May, you can do the part of the story we discussed.
    I have my ideas here
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    Sapphire's POV

    Omigod! Justin's back, Justin's back! I strolled down the hall. Singing is the only thing I would do when I'm spontaneously happy. Yeah... I'll let you in on a little secret.


    Me and Aly used to be best friends up until 6th grade. We got into this stupid fight. But when we were friends, me and her would always harmonize. I sighed. I wish I could harmonize with her now.. I just wish everything was the same. We would always sing "Scientist" I remember it. We would go like this...

    FLASHBACK 5TH GRADE

    "Hey Aly," I would shout. "Let's sing a song!"

    "Okay," she replied. "Which song?"

    This was a weird question of course, because we always had our own favorite song.

    Scientist.

    "That is such..." I giggled.

    "You're right," Aly laughed. "Let's go, it's your turn to play the guitar!"

    We ran in and I grabbed the guitar. I started to fiddle with it, and then I got the tune.

    "C'mon. Let's sing."

    I nodded and began to sing.

    SAPPHIRE

    Come up to meet you,
    Tell you I'm sorry,
    You don't know how lovely you are..


    ALY

    I had to find you,
    Tell you I need you,
    Tell you I set you,
    Apart..


    BOTH
    Tell me your secrets,
    And ask me your questions,
    Oh let's go back to the start...


    ALY
    Running in circles, coming up tales..
    Heads on the science, apart...


    NORMAL

    I turned, I knew exactly where I was going. The music room. But, I found somebody unexpected.























    "Aly?"
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    I really like how this is turning out
     
  13. ._. I really planned on ditching this story
     
  14. Omgerwd!!!! I love this!!! 