fear with the word but. "but what?" "He's in surgery..." Her hands flew to her mouth. --------------- Accidentally posted before finished cuz I slipped. Let me know how it is!!
"I don't know why, tori. That's all they told me." I moved closer to her. She dissolved into tears, laying down on my lap. I awkwardly stroked her hair, staring down at my cream colored carpet. "Tori... We can go see him at five." I looked at her and she sat up slowly, as if it pained her. Hope filled her green eyes as she looked at me. "I promise." I looked at the time. "come on we have 45 minutes and they're at Creek." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I drove quickly, getting to the hospital in 30 minutes. Tori sat in the passenger seat of my little pick up truck, occasionally bursting back into tears. Other than her sobbing, the entire ride was silent. We checked in at the little lobby and were told that they were both in room 109 of the ICU wing. "both of them are doing fine and can be released in 3 days." the woman told us, a little to cheery. I practically ran, dragging Tori. we got to the room and stood there for a second before walking in. --------------- boys? let me know what you think!!