Scarlett's POV ( flashback ) "Ugh,mom how much longer?" I was bored and I had a huge headache. I wish I could just take a nap sometimes."an hour" my mom said. "I wish we could teleport everywhere!" I had said " me too " she replied. I want some action in my life,I thought. Yet did I know that I would have a lot of action soon enough.
Okay, here's my advice: ~Use paragraphs. Start a new one every time a new person is speaking. ~Use lots of detail and description. ~Capitalize the first letter in every sentence. Including dialogue.
Totally agree. Elaborate what they're feeling, it makes the writing look like a piece of art. Angel gave me that advice