Lynn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lovefiredancer, Jan 10, 2013.

  1. Her hair fell in front of her face, hiding her small smile. Her phone glowing up in her face. He always made her smile. No matter how bad her day was.

    "I miss you babygirl <3" the text read.

    Her day had been bad. She was stuck in classes she hated and work had been bad. People were just mean.

    She quickly typed in a response and set her phone down. She looked up in the mirror. Her brown hair fell around her waist. Her ice blue eyes were sad. Her full lips were pulled into a small smile.

    She picked up her phone and called her friend.

    "I need help..."

    "I'm on my way, Lynn."

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    Tori leaned against the porch walls as I walked out.

    "Lynn! Are you ok?" she asked urgently.

    "Tori, I'm scared.." I responded, looking at my beautiful model friend. "I-it's Michell..."

    She rolled her eyes and gave me that smirk. "he's faithful." she brushed past me into my small one bedroom apartment. "he wouldn't hurt you."

    I shook my head. "he's in the hospital."
     
  2. WOW lynn , very nice story , I'm impressed write now . So amazing !!!!!
     
  3. I love it!
    Bump!
     
  4. I loved it. Tell me when you update 
     
  5. I will do 
     
  6. hey raver girl

    Keep writing.. I love it
     
  7. well-written! :) Nice Story~ Keep up the Good work!! ^^
     
  8. Good writing Lynn..:3,keep it up...
     
  9. Its really good just needs more detail....







    BUMP!!!!!!!! 
     
  10.  Just needs more detail
    xx riri 
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  11. Good job! I'm intrigued with this story.
     
  12. Great story love it 
     
  13. Nice. Should have a continuation though.
     
  14. Hunter, it does ill update tonight 
     
  15. Yup, it does need more detail.

    Otherwise, it's great!
     
  16. That was a good story Lynn keep doing ur thing
     
  17. nice storytell me when ur update 
     
  18. a very nice short story