My Big Moment

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GP-TheNerdyOne, Jan 10, 2013.

  1. I truly suck.
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    Cosette raced down the empty hall of the school. She was late, she knew. Cosette slipped into the classroom. All eyes were on her. She mouthed I'm sorry to Miss Pointyae, and went to her seat. And now, only the boys eyes were on her. Made sense since she was beautiful. She could feel some intense staring at her. Cosette looked up. What did she see but, Justin, staring at her. She raised an eyebrow at him, and he blushed deeply.

    "Class, today we are talking about marriage." Miss Pointyae said, quite loudly.
    The class did a collective groan.

    Miss Pointyae ignored the groan. "We are doing an experiment on how marriage is, and you kids think it is so easy."
    Cosette sat up in her seat. She was interested in marriage really. Justin thought it was weird, but Cosette begged to differ.

    "We will pair up, boy girl, by your choice of course. After all, it is marriage."

    Justin and Cosette exchanged glances. This was going to be awesome!
    In Cosette's mind.

    "Begin,"

    Cosette slipped out of her seat just as Justin slipped out of his. They met, and Justin asked, "Will you marry me?"
    Cosette giggles and nods.

    "And, for a gift, here. He took his hand from out behind his box and revealed a makeup box.

    "Ooh, Justin! This looks the exact same as mine!"

    "That's because I took it from you, you doof."

    Cosette glared at Justin.
    Justin chuckles. "I'm sorry baby. Forgive me?"

    Cosette turned around.

    "So now you're giving me the silent treatment,"

    "Isn't that obvious?" Cosette scoffed.

    "Silent treatment ended! I'm the luckiest husband ever! Cosette..?"
    His celebration had ended.

    "We should go to Miss Pointyae. We need to tell her we married." Cosette said coldly.

    Justin followed her to the front of classroom until they heard thumping. Everybody in the class froze.
    Nobody knew what is was or who it was.

    In came 3 very large guys. They all wore a name tag on they're shirt.
    Cosette could just barely make out the words.
    Guards.
    They came walking over to Cosette, and they all kneeled down.
    The first guard stepped up.

    "I believe you are Princess Cosette,"
     
  2. Bump!! More!!
     
  3. Wow, 3 bumps in the last 10 minutes?






























    I win!
     
  4. Update!!!
     
  5. I'll try to update tomorrow!
    First thing I'm going to do when I come home!
     
  6. I decided to do it tonight
    And in POVs. Author's POV confuses me.
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    "P-Princess?"

    Everybody stared at me. But the most hurtful stare was from Justin. He was glaring at me.

    "Yes Your Highness. Your grandfather was the king before he died. Your mother and father refused to take the crown, therefore making you Princess Cosette." He explained.

    "What country am I ruling?" I asked.

    "Costanova." He answered. "We also leave now if you are willing to take the crown. If not, then royalty will be passed on to the Mac family,"

    I looked at Justin. His face was expressionless now.

    I took in a deep breath.

    "I'm coming,"

    5 hours later we arrived in Costanova. I was super excited but scared at the same time. I also felt like I was betraying Justin. I thought about him, and suddenly a stream of tears leaked through. Joe, my bodyguard, noticed this. But he didn't ask me what was wrong. And I was grateful for it.
    We landed and as Joe helped me out of the plane, I felt free and full of joy. My eyes were sparkling, I knew.
    We got into the limo and I fell asleep. Next thing I knew someone was tapping me on the shoulder.

    "Princess Cosette, we must get inside the castle." Joe was talking to me.

    "Huh? We're here?"

    "Yes, Princess Cosette,"

    I jumped out of the limo and into the castle as I was excited to see Gran. I haven't seen her in such a long time. I can't wait to explore this castle and Costanova!
    I can't wait to explore my home.
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    Quickie right now.
    I'm super tired.
    I'll make 2 updates tomorrow.
     
  7. This is good update
     
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  9. Thanks riri.
    I love your story
     
  10. No prob haha 

    Your story is cute 

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    Hope that turns out right 
     
  11. I'm sorry guys.
    I can't update.
    Writer's block.
    Give me a few ideas
    But it will still be a surprise...
     
  12. Have justin go visit her
     
  13. Have Justin be her prince <3