Hello this is my first time writing and I'm really nerves lol so here it goes "Liz wake up or you are going to miss your bus and I'm not driving u to school on your first day so wake up!!!" Yelled my mom. "ok mom I'm up so quit your yelling plz" Liz yelled back to her mom. Liz shower and gets ready then heads to the bus stop and waits. ~phone vibrates~ "who is texting me no one ever texts me" Liz thought to her self. It turns out to be her best friend she had to leave in Berlin NH cat. Cat wanted to tell her best friend good luck at her new school and that she missed her very much. Then all of a sudden the bus is here and Liz didn't even know!! Then when she looked up the bus driver had a very angry look on his face so she got on the bus and sat down. Then when the bus was at the next stop a very cute boy was being picked up. That boy sat next to Liz and said " hi my names Andrew u look new what's your name cutie?" " m m my name is Liz" stammered Liz and as she said that she couldn't help but blush like crazy. Please tell me what u think criticism is welcomed so I can make my story even better