Clock's Ticking

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Dec 14, 2012.

  1. Wall me when u update and mention the name of the story please
     
  2. <.< >.> I do declare that I like this very much so
     
  3. That was wierd. I was reading back and saw one of my stories from August, last year.(2011) It's cool to see how you're writings improved.:D I'd recomend reading some of your older works, to other readers. It helps you see what's been improved and what can be improved more. 
     
  4. I'm quitting this story and continueing it on Wattpad. :3 I have another story I want to write for PimD instead. Please check it out on Wattpad though, as it'll be a little different. Same title.
     
  5. I love that app! <3
     
  6. I cant find it.
     
  7. Type in 'Shadow_Wolf44'
    Story= 'Clock's Ticking'
     
  8. Updating it later.
     
  9. Updated there. Still behind this one though.

    Will keep this thread near the top so the other readers can see, but then I'll let it die.
     
  10. NUUUUUUUUU YOU CAN'T END THIS
     
  11. It's being continued, just on Wattpad.

    (Wattpad's a free app with loads of great stories. If you don't already have it, you should get it. :D )
     
  12. Bump. It's okay guys, Ima continue here. :3 Dont think it's ready for Wattpad yet. D:
     
  13. Yes! *put hands up in the air*
    I throw my hands in the air sometimes, cause I'm crazy
    Parody of Dynamite. 
    Wassup?
    Bump!
     
  14. XD
    Ima update in a sec.
     
  15. Sorry for not updating in forever. Had bad writers block. Sorry the update's so short! D:

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    I chewed on my lip, willing my body to stop violently shaking. A salty droplet of water escaped my eye; everything that had happened now catching up to me. I burrowed my face into my welcoming hoodie, squeezing shut my bloodshot eyes.

    Flashback.

    Work. Over. Shift. Done. Thank God.

    I slipped my slender body into a over sized hoodie and dark blue skinny jeans. I was sick of haveing to wear s****y clothes. More to the point, I was sick of my stupid job and all the additional crap.

    I backed out of the strangers' bedroom. My "work" now done. I carefully walked down the stairs, in awe of the poshness of the house I was in. Just as I was about to step out the front door, a glint of something silver caught my eye.

    I looked left and right, but the hallway only held myself. The man I was just with now asleep. Or so I thought...

    I walked over to the glimmer of silver, to see it was a wrapper. I frowned. My curiousity rose; my human nature tempting me rip of the layer of shining silver. I still am not sure to this day why I did it, I mean, it was none of my buisness...

    I carefully peeled back the wrapping paper to see a piece of card. Plain white card. On the card was messy black handwriting...

    I couldn't help it. I was always known for being curious. I read through the card...

    My eyes bulged and my hands trembled. I dropped the note to the floor - out of place in the tidy house- and fled, terrified, out the front door and into the night...

    (Thought I was going to tell you? Nah not yet. ;D Sorry. :L )

    Flashback end.

    The warmth lulled me into an uneasy sleep. I was out. Unaware of anything going on around me. Unaware of the attic latch gradually opening...

    (Thought I owed you some useful info. You know where he is now. Yet you don't know how, who or why, and that won't be revealed for a while.Sorry.)