Home is where the heart is... I guess

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Player11171305, Dec 21, 2012.

  1. "No! Don't think of it like that!" My mom said in her enthusiastic tone. "Well, how am I supposted to take it? Your send me to rehab, which I don't need!" I yelled at my mother. "See.. Exhibit A, You need to watch your temper. Your not acting like yourself Lexus and quite frankly your scaring me with your mood swings." My mom replied in a worried tone. "MOM! I AM FINE! MAYBE YOUR THE ONE WITH THE ISSUES! HAVE YOU EVER THOUGHT OF THAT YOU BI... " Lexus was cut off my her mom "DON'T YOU USE THAT TONE WITH ME, YOUNG LADY!" Lexus's mom yelled at the top of her lungs.

    "Whatever" Lexus replied getting into the car. The ride to Sunny Springs was quiet. Lexus finally turned on the radio, blaring her favorite song. Her mom quickly changed the station to classical and turned down the volume. Lexus spent the next to hours finding as many ways to aggervate her mom as possible.

    Finally, they arrived. When they pulled up a large gate covered the enterance. Lexus's mom got out the car and walked up to the chained fence. All of a sudden, a strange man with a wickedly evil smile on his face appeared infront of the fence. "Welcome to Sunny Springs" he said as he unlocked the gate.

    The gate made a loud, screatching sound as it swung open. Lexus's mom signaled her daughter to get out of the car. Lexus stepped out of the car and went to follow her mom. "This place smells like old people, and puke." Lexus whispered to her mom.

    (This is all for now. This is also based on a true story, so please no hurtful comment. I HOPE YOU GUYS LOVE IT  ill update later)
     
  2. UPDATE:

    "This is where you stop Ms.... Mrs?" The house keeper asked. "Mrs. Matthews" Lexus's mom answered with a cheeky grin on her face. "Well, Mrs. Matthews. I'm afraid you can go no further." The keeper said as he took Lexus's bag to her new room.

    A couple of tears rolled down Lexus's cheeks as her and her mother said their final goodbyes. "Trust me, Sweetie. This is for the best" Mrs. Matthews said giving her daughter one last hug. Lexus cried as she watched her mother drive off into the sunset. "Come on, Miss Lexus" The keeper said as he guided her into the house with that same evil grin. Screeeetch. The house door swung open and the gates slammed shut. Causing a ringing sensation in Lexus's ears. "You'll get used too it" The keeper said noticing her facial expression.
     
  3. I just noticed I went from 1st to 3rd point of view 
     
  4. Oh well I'm sure thatll get better lol and great start keep writing
     
  5. Great!!! 