Nights of the round table

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Xx-_Lucas_-xX, Dec 18, 2012.

  1. ok guys and gals
    i want to know if this should b a rp or a story. i cant decide so u tell me.
     
  2. ok so 1 person thinks it should b an rp
     
  3. Knights***

    I think it should be a story because there aren't many girl parts and it's pretty sexist.
     
  4. Make it a story! Too many RPs right now, could make a story now and make it an RP when some has die down. 
     
  5. ok story it is
     
  6. Yay new story!!!
     
  7. ima try to get the story started tomorrow
     
  8. The year was 1478 (random year) and a boy named Aurther was born. Aurther Brian Livingstone. He and his family were not the richest of the kingdom but his father and mother made sure that there was food that they could eat. When young Aurther was only about seven years old he got a job. It wasent the best jod but it got him money. He had to clean the horse stables every day and then he had to help the jousters put ther armor on. They hated people touching their swords and horses. Aurther made sure that had had never touched the horses or the swords. When Aurther goes home he has to do choures. Just like most kids his age he feeds the sheep, the pigs, and if they have them, the cows. Auther did not like his brother, Grant, Grant was a jouster. He was a stuck up snob just like the rest of the other sixteen year olds in their time.
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    well thats the first part. hope u ppl like it
     
  9. Bumpity Bump Bump! :D
     
  10. Actually his name was Aurthur Pendragon.
     
  11. Make sure your sentences lead into each other. I feel like some of them are just randomly put in there.
     
  12. It's good but you do need to do your research. There are a lot I missed things here.
     
  13. This story is more of a list of things.
     
  14. ok thx. and its a fake story.in not going to copy it from.a book or anything
     
  15. Still you could get the names right. Aurther Pendragon.
     
  16. ok ill change the name. and ill try to make the story not so much as a list.
     
  17. ok. that was the back story.

    Monday October 12, 1478
    It was a peaceful mid October day. The sun was bright and the clouds were white. Eveyone was happy, even young Aurther Pendragon (i had to change his last name srry). Even thou Aurther was cleaning the horse stables he was still very cheerful. All he had to do was pick up some fesices. He always loved horses althou he had never rode one befor.
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    srry for the short post
     
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