Harvest Moon Fanfiction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Midnighttherabbit (01), Dec 15, 2012.

  1. Prologue
    Dear sweet ......
    Ok, first of all, lets get this straight. I don't know why I came here. Maybe I hated trying to scrape together an honest living. Maybe I couldn't stand that place that for so long I had called home. Whatever the reason, the desicion to come was a desicion of a lifetime.
    You know what happened next, and you know that it didn't work out.
    Sorry it had to be this way.
    Your beloved .......

    What do you think? Is it ok?
    Chapter 1 coming SOOON!
     
  2. Damn it! I got some "constructive critisism" on my first chapter and..... Basicly have to rewrite it! Ohhhh dear! Sorry for delay! XD