my story(:

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *taylor_283 (01), Dec 16, 2012.

  1. Greg and Jasmine were waliking through the woods on that dark windy night. They had been waking for six hours now and both of thier nerves were frayed, as they both just wanted to get out of the woods.
    "Greg, I'm scared. I swear I heard footsteps." whispered Jasmin, in a worried tone.
    "Jasmine, I wish at some point in your life you would shut up! All you do ever is talk talk talk. Like really I'm surprised you haven't ran out of breath." Screamed Greg as he turned around swiftly. He had forgotten how dark it was in that part of the woods at night, he couldn't see a foot in front of him, he couldn't head Jasmines deep breathing behind him either.
    "JASMINE?! Jasmine where are you? I was only messing around I'm sorry, Jasmine stop messing around!" he screamed. He waited a couple of minutes. Them he heard a scream in the distance...

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  2. Hurriedly he ran towards it. Geez my parents are gonna kill me after they hear about this, he thought to himself. "JASMINE!" he yelled, hoping for a response. Still, he heard nothing. As he was running he didn't notice that the trail he had been running on, had vanished. He heard another scream, but this time it sounds less far away, it sounded like it was underneath him. "this is crazy" he said under his breath, "I bet this Is all just a dream, jasmines not really missing, she's hiding. She's just doing this to get back at me. She'll get what's coming to he...." suddenly a piercing scream cut though the air, it was chilling enough to send chills down his spine.