So this is a collab with CowboyDante! Hope you all enjoy this chapter! ~Chapter 1~ Raven POV: I excitedly hurried over to the the big Christmas tree in Rockefeller Center. I smiled broadly at the Christmas tree as I stopped in front of it. I looked around to see a lot of people gathered there, taking pictures, laughing and playing, and just sitting around enjoying themselves. I loved this time of the year, I looked forward to the Christmas tree every year because I always get to turned on the lights to it at night everyday until New Years is over. I searched around for my parents, I smiled excitedly as I saw them working on the tree. I ran over to them and started helping them with the tree. "Excited for turning on the lights again this year?" My Dad asked me with a wink. "Obviously Dad! I always looked forward to it!" I replied, rolling my eyes. We continued to work on the tree until night time. I looked up at it from my break and my eyes wandered around and landed on my best friend, Dante. He was looking back at me with a smile, he strolled over to me with his hands in his pants pockets. "I see you have it already up." He said to me, looking at it. "Yeah, we always up before nighttime, Doofus." I answered, hitting him on the arm. He rubbed his arm, and looked over at me with a mocked hurt face. "That hurts!" He exclaimed. I rolled my eyes at him and looked back at the tree with a smile. My parents waited for more people to gathered around the Christmas tree before they announced to everyone that it was time for me to turned on the lights. I walked behind the tree and turned on the lights, I looked up at it as the lights turned on to the very top of the trees with a proud smile. I stepped forward to walked back to where everyone was but found myself flat on my face. I groaned as I pushed myself up from the ground, I looked down at my foot and saw that it was tangled up around the cords. I untangled myself from them and got up again just in time to see all the lights on the tree to fried up and popped all the way up to the big star on the top of the tree. Crap! I heard gasps from all over the Rockefeller Center. I hurried back in front of the tree to see everyone looking at me in horror. Some of the little kids starts to cry at the sight of the tree. One of the little kids came up and pointed to me with an accusing finger. "You're not getting anything from Santa this year!" He screamed. I looked him, a bit annoyed. "That's great but Santa isn't even real." I said loudly in an annoyed tone. The kid looked at me with a sacred face and started to cry loudly. I looked up to see a camera in front of me filming everything that I said. I looked at the camera with horrified expression. "Shit!" I muttered. }*{ Oh my god! What's going to happen? Guess you're just going have to find out! See you Lovelies later!
Why are kids sooo annoying? I have a nephew and a niece ad well as three other babies in my family and I love them all to bits but dammit. They are so annoying! xD BUMP!
Bump! It's great, but maybe lay your speech out like this: (eg) "Where are we going?" I asked, raising an eybrow. "Not sure," replied Darc. "Ugh." (Random example.)