The Rising Of A New God

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bro_emokid (01), Dec 16, 2012.

  1. It has been 3 long years since Kronos had risen from the depths of the earth, since Hades aloud him to escape from the fiery pits of Tartarus. Zeus has been weakened from the death of Poseidon and the betrayal of his third brother Hades. Poseidon is dead, Ares was killed by Kratos, the new God of War, Aphrodite and the rest of the gods are fighting to keep Kronos and his minions from completely destroying Earth and letting the other Titans out from their prison. Zeus needs to find a demigod of Poseidon, half human half god, the godly parent was Poseidon. I'm getting off track, Zeus needs to find a worthy demigod that Poseidon gave life to and allow that Demigod become the new God of the Seas, and he needs to do it fast, the minions are beginning to cross the ocean from California to the other continents and wreaking havoc on the rest of the world.
     
  2. Thanks may...I'm now stumped for the update
     
  3. Kratos sits on the thrown made of black gold with armor so strong not even a godly weapon could penetrate it. Kratos watches the war between gods and Kronos and his minions. Fearing on that all the gods would die and he would be left all alone on mount Olympus. Kratos decides to help with the battle, he steps off his thrown and plunges himself down. Down he fell untill he landed with a thump behind all the gods. Kratos looked over them, counting to make sure everyone was there. There were two missing, the fallen Poseidon and Zeus. Kratos tried reaching Zeus telepathically but couldn't. He could reach Zeus nor could the other gods, which meant Zeus was either a coward or was fighting somewhere else.
     
  4. This story has potential and a amazing plot. Fan of Greek mythology myself.

    Just A Small Critique
    •Few spelling and grammatical errors
    •Use paragraphs, it's easier on the readers eyes
    •Longer Updates? Honestly you can do it anyway. Short, frequent updates or long steady updates. Or what're you like. Just don't take to long to update or your read will lose interest.
     
  5. Oh and BUMP
     
  6. Thanks blood roze I'll keep that In mind
     
  7. Sweet you can call me Rose. Everyone else does