The Kidnappers Secret

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Dec 9, 2012.

  1. Update
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    Next thing I know I am tied up somewhere. Well, somewhere not very nice. I was up against a cold brick wall with my hands tied behind me. I saw Annie next to me with bruises and cuts all over her face.

    " Annie.. Annie! W-what did they do to you!?"

    " When you blacked out, they started kicking me.. But they thing I am worried about is you!! Your even worse than me! Are you ok!?"

    Then the pain started to kick in. The indescribable pain traveled up from my spine to my head, to my arms.. To everywhere. Then I realise how bad this really was.

    " Annie, I am so sorry! It's all my fault! " tears formed in my eyes and I tried not to blink, I didn't want Annie to see me cry.

    " No it's not your fau-"

    Then Jake and Ash walked in.. I didn't know what to do! Wether to be cockey or be afraid.

    " So I see miss sleepy head has woke up then " Ash laughed.

    Jake just stood there playing along with Ash's evil plan. It felt so awkward. I didn't know what to say or nothing!

    " Shut it Ash." Annie said bravely.

    Ash slapped her hard across the face leaving a bit red mark on the side of it. Now. Now it was time for the real Kelsey to come out. The strong one. The brave one.

    " You bloody touch her one more time and I swear, you will not know what has just hit you!!" I screamed at Ash kicking him in the shin. " HA." I smirked.

    Well, I'm not going to lie but it felt quite good being brave, being strong. Jake yet again just stood there, but this time with a different expression on his face. Amazement. I think he was a bit shocked that I was actually standing up for myself and fighting back. I had never been that sort of person really.

    " You stupid-" Ash went to finish his sentence but.. Didn't.

    " Oh, save it you potato." I giggled and Annie joined in too. This was getting fun, no matter how much he abused me. I was going to iChat back a probe to him that I wasn't weak.

    " Shut up." Jake said in a deep tone of voice.

    I was still facing Annie. Me and her were still giggling about what I had just said to Ash. I was quite proud of myself.

    " Or what? Your going to-" I was interrupted at that point with a gun pointing at me.

    " Shut it." He put his hand firmly on the trigger.

    What was I to do now? I couldn't show him that, my braveness was all an act.. Now, I was really stuck.
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    Sorry it's short!
     
  2. OMG!!!!!! Update!!!!!!!!
     
  3. OMG BUMP UPDATE HURRY UP B4 I DIE AND PASS OUT FOR EXCITEMENT I LIKE EFFIN LUV THIS STORYYYY
     
  4. Great update pixie!! I'll update tonight or tomorrow morning
     
  5. Or u could always update now....
     
  6. NO UPDATE NOW
     
  7. Thank you!

    And ok sweetie
     
  8. Omg i want to hear more please update soon
     
  9. Here's my next part hope you like it
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    "What not so tough now huh?! What cat got your tongue?!"

    He stepped closer and closer to me. Aiming the gun at my head. Was this going to be the end? I didn't even get to tell my mom I love her before she left with her friends. My heart was racing, thoughts of what I would have done if this never happened. Memories of Jake and I happy and inlove. I felt the gun barrel touch my forehead.

    "Why Jake?! Why?!"

    "WHY KELSEY?! YOUR ASKING WHY?! YOU BROKE UP WITH ME! I LOVE YOU KELSEY! I WILL DO ANYTHING TO HAVE YOU! BUT IF I CAN'T HAVE YOU NO BODY CAN"

    Tears weld up into my eyes. I looked up at Jake with pleading eyes to let me live. His foot connected into my broken ribs and pain surged through my body, I let out an agonizing cry. I looked over at Annie and saw her being dragged away by Ash who was looking down at the floor as he carried Annie out the room.
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    ***Annie's POV***

    Kelsey, Why! Why Kelsey! She only wanted to do
    whats best for her! I couldn't let them kill my bestfriend. Tears were streaming down my face. I was uncontrollably crying. Ash set me down in an empty room. He untied my hands and legs and pinned me against the wall. His deep sapphire blue eyes looking into my puffy green eyes. He glanced at the floor tears falling from his eyes.

    "I love you Annie. I always had. Im so sorry I thought this was a joke. I tried to not let him abuse you girls. This wasn't supposed to happen. Jake just went insane and obssessed with Kelsey. I didn't want you pulled in this."

    "Ash I can't believe you... This was supposed to be a joke?! Kelsey is gonna get killed! You have to help her--"

    I was cut off gaurd from Ash pressing his lips against mine. Electric impulses surging through my body. It felt so wrong but was yet so right. I was aching for Ash for a very long time. But, was I able to love the man who helped get my bestfriend killed? I pushed him away looking at the floor pondering the question in my mind.

    "Ash I love you too but you helped Jake in this nightmare."

    "I know Annie I'm---"

    He was cut off then there was a gun fire. My heart sinking to the floor. Did Jake just kill Kelsey?!
     
  10. Oh my god!? How the hell am I meant to top that!?!? 
     
  11. Another update, couldn't wait
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    ***Kelsey's POV***

    I heard the dreaded gun shot. But. I am still alive.. I opened my eyes to see Jake holding the gun up in the air pointing at the celling. I stared at the gun, and then at Jake. How could Jake do this!?

    " Kelsey, I am not afraid to shoot you!" He reset the gun and pointed it back at me.

    " Go on then! Shoot me! " I yelled.

    I could see in his eyes, he didn't want to kill me. Maybe hurt me, but not kill me.

    " Thought so.." I screeched trying to put on a brave face.

    I closed my eyes and rested my head on the wall, me back was aching and my ribs were in agony.

    BANG.

    The gun went again. But this time, it hit me.. I felt even more agony travelling up and down my body. I looked at my thigh where the pain came from. There was blood. Everywhere! I carefully put my shaky hand over it smothering blood all over my fingers.

    " I told you. " jake said throwing the gun on the floor.

    " But you didn't kill me.." I said with fear in my voice.
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    ***Annies POV***

    I stared into Ash's eyes. Tears still streaming down my face.

    " Annie I am sorry " Ash apologised ever so apologetic.

    I sighed. " It's fine. Now we need to save Kels--"

    There was another gun shot. I went to ran to the door but Ash stopped me. I needed to save her.

    " ASH!!!" Yelled jake from the other room.

    " Coming!" Ash yelled back. " I will do as much as can to save her." Ash said and gently kissed me on the forehead.

    I sat back and rested my head on the wall, hoping that Kelsey was ok. I don't know what I would ever do without her.

    " Jake! You------" I heard Ash yell but he was cut off by Jake mumbling things to him.

    I didn't hear the rest. Had he killed Kelsey?? What has he done?? What did I need to do??

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    Hope you enjoyed. Sorry it's a bit boring!
     
  12. ahhhh!!!! How am I supposed to be that!
     
  13. Bump and update! Wall me when updated :)