Update We walked into the tall glass building of my law firm. It was beautiful and elegant with simple paintings organized onto the wall and a tint of gold painted on the walls. "Here it is," I lead him to a tall wood door opening it. We walked into a cozy office with wood furniture and purple walls. "Hello Macy! Who's this?" I looked at Jennifer smiling. She was a gorgeous blonde. She looked like she came straight out of a fashion magazine with her petite figure. "Ma'am I'm Evan Millard I would like to apply for a position at your lovely law firm," he winked at me. I rolled my eyes "try not to cry too hard when you don't get the job, cya later Jen!"
Hello again I see you've learned quite a lot about writing since your last story. You seem more descriptive and more into setting a mood for the reader. Though you occasionally slip into the language of text message, I can see you improving there as well.