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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_Whateva_ (01), Dec 2, 2012.

  1. Prologue
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    Pilot: We're about a klick out from Target LZ over.
    I am Sgt.Conway fighting in Iraq. I'm part of the army medic team I just cover the medic's.
    Pilot: Enemy rockets inbound with trackers!
    Pvt: dodge them!
    Pilot: I can't!
    (Beep,beep,BEEEEEEEPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!)
    Pvt: I'm Slipping!!!!!! -slips and dies hitting the rock face.-
    Corporal: BOBBY!!!!!
    BLAAAAMMM!!!!!!!!
     
    #1 *_Whateva_ (01), Dec 2, 2012
  2. Is this a joke?
     
    #2 *Spitfire697 (01), Dec 3, 2012
  3. 0.0
     
    #3 -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Dec 3, 2012
  4. Dear Poster, this isn't how you make stories. Please get your story facts right.
     
    #4 TheDiariesOfMe, Dec 3, 2012
  5. It was... How should i say it, not appealing to the reader
     
    #5 *ThePurpleComet (01), Dec 3, 2012
  6. Yea..... Sorry let this die...
     
    #6 *_Whateva_ (01), Dec 3, 2012
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