Spartan 01

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Syoka, Dec 2, 2012.

  1. Ok just give to me good or bad


    Prolog
    "You brave men and women have been hand picked for a special program called the spartan program you are the best the elite show me that," says a man in uniform.
    "Admiral Jackson when will this program start?"
    " It will start next week get packed and meet the ship in the docking bay," replies Jackson.
    " May you all live long to a old age oo ra!" Jackson yells.
    "Oo ra!" replies the crowd and they get up to leave but one solider.
    " Solider are you going to leave?" Jackson asks him.
    " Sir I don't have anyone to say bye too and I'm packed do you think I could wait at the docking bay intill the ship comes for us? "
    "Do what you want its your time," replies Jackson
    " Yes sir!" replies the solider
     
  2. ...made me think of Halo .-.
    So much Halo 4 x_x.
     
  3. Alot of halo
    kinda good
     
  4. Chapter 1
    5 years later

    "Pilot put us down!" I say
    " yes sir!"
    I jump off the falcon and roll and get my gun ready just in case. " Tiger off, Buffalo off, Dog off, Dolphin off," I say and I think why did admiral Jackson make us all have animal names? " Bear we're all off," says dolphin.
    I start walkin to rally point eyes open. " Watch you back, we have reason to believe we're facing covenant," I say.

    I'm ending there just comment