"Hello, I'm Jen." I said, waving at the new people around me. I was in Italy, to them I was just "the new exchange student" at their college. They all murmured hi in Italian,"Bon giorrno." I nodded and walked to the girls dormatory or what I thought was the girls dormatory and pushed open the door,"Hello?" I called out into the silence. A tall dark haired, blue eyed boy, stepped out from behind the door,"Hi, I'm Jacob." He said. I blushed, a bit embarrassed because I was at the boys dormatory,"Oh...um hello. I'm Jen." I said. The boy-Jacob smiled,"You must be looking for the girls dormatory, I'll take you. Just follow me." He said and walked past me and out the door. I blushed and hurrued after him.
UPDATE: I looked around but didn't see Jacob,"Damn it!" I said under my breath." A boy stepped up beside me,"Hello, are you the new exchange student?" He asked me. I nodded & blushed,"I'm Jen." He smiled,"I've been needing another U.S. citizen here, I'm the only one...or was....but now theres you..." The boy stared into my eyes for five minutes and then blinked," Oh...I'm Chris by the way," He said and smiled at me,"You have beautiful eyes." He-Chris continued. I blushed.
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Chris smiled,"Nice to see I can make you blush." I giggled, okay is it me or is this guy flirty? I thought to myself. I stared into his handsome dark brown eyes, it was like swimming in a vat of chocolate. Chris smiled,"Where ya headed?" He asked me. I smiled back,"Oh I'm headed to the girls dormatory, I was following someone named Jacob but...he seems to have disappeared." I said and looked around. Chris took my hand in his,"Well I could take you to it." I smiled,"I would love that, thank you." And with that we started walking...i wanna say....toward the girls dormatory? Oh I hope so O.O
Haha xD UPDATE PEOPLE: When we arrived the sun shone brighter than ever, I wondered what was going on. "Well we are here." Chris said, stopping in front of the dormatory door. Even though..well I could tell by the sign already, but he was sweet to have brought me here. "Thank you." I said and smiled at him. Chris smiled back,"Okay well I guess I'll be seeing you around Jen." He said. "Okay," I said, waving goodbye at him,"See you later." Chris walked away, I wondered where he was going but I didn't stop him to ask, instead I pushed open the door to the girls dormatory and stepped inside.... Inside of the dormatory it smelled like strawberrys, and I loved the smell of strawberrys, heck I love STRAWBERRYS! Why are the called strawberrys though? They don't look like straws.... "Bon giornno!" A dirty blonde haired girl waved from the steps above me. I smiled and waved back,"Bon giornno."
UPDATE: The girl smiled at me and ran down the stairs, passed me, and out the door. "Ciao!" She yelled behind her. I carried my backpack and two suitcases and walked up the stairs. I saw a door that said,"Welcome To Our School Jen From America. This Is Your Dorm, Enjoy " I opened the door to the room and walked inside. Inside of the room was a beautiful queen bed, a dresser on one side of the bed with a square shaped mirror over it, and a nightstand on the other side with beautiful roses on. My favorite flower is a rose so I was really happy to see them. The closet was huge too and had tons of sgelfs on one side and a place to hang things on the other. There was also a flat screen TV on a little table in front of the bed. Oh it looked like paradise. "Bon giornno." Someone-a girl-said from behind me. I looked at the diorway of the room and a straight brown haired girl stood there,"Bon giornno." She repeated. I smiled and waved,"English?" The girl nodded,"I do speak English, I'm Jessica." She said. "Nice to meet you Jessica, I'm Jen, how are you?" I asked her kindly, knowing that me and her would make great friends. "I'm great, how was your flight here? Do you need help unpacking? Theres a purple comforter in the closet for you with green and black pillow cases. I'll help if you'd like." Jessica saud, seeming eager to help. I smiled and nodded.
UPDATE: As we set up dorm and fixed up the bed Jessica and I chatted a bit. "So how did you all know my favorite things?" I asked her, seriously wondering how they knew my favorite flower was a rose and that my favorite colors were purple, black, and green. "Oh we looked on your CollegeEffinity page." Jessica told me. CollegeEffinity was a website that mostly just college kids used, it specialized in helping you find colleges, study for your classes, chat with your teachers, take a tutoring course, help with your homework, and it let you talk with other students in any university. Since this was my Sophmore year in college I already had one. "Oh. Cool." I replied. Jessica looked at me,"You know you can friend me on CollegeEffinity, I'm the helpful girl around the dormatory. Not that everyone else won't help you, but I should be the first one you look for, they are usually always busy. Thats why Annie ran out the door really fast after saying hello to you." I nodded in understanding. I knew they all had classes, I had not been emailed mine on CollegeEffinity yet so I was stuck in the dormatory all week. Good thing they have an arcade, I read about in the brochure to come here. Yet, Italia U. was not necessarily the perfect college to go to, but I think I'll be okay. Whenever I need help I'll just find Jacob, Chris, or Jessica. "Ciao, my class starts in ten." Jessica told me. I nodded and waved goodbye,"Ciao. Thank you for your help." "Your welcome." Jessica replied before dashing out the door. What could I do? I guess I could go on CollegeEffinity....now if only I could find my laptop....