Wow Tash this was brilliant! I love how you ended it(although I really would've loved it if he didn't die)but it was totally unexpected and I loved it! you're a great writer! I can't wait for your next story, I'm sure it'll be amazing! Keep it up!
Thanks I will probably have a little break before I start posting more stories. I have learnt that I fail miserably when trying to write two or more stories at once, so I have to stick to one decent one. Though I might be doing a collaboration with my good friend Ali who has changed her username so I don't know it anymore. If she still wants to do a collaboration.
I hear ya. I have two stories out and it's hard keeping up with both if them >.< but yay can't wait for your stories ^-^
Omg i just read all of this for the first time. Its smashing absolutely smashing. What you should do is take this story put all the updates together and publish this. I would think this would sell alot of copies.
A few people have told me to do that, but I doubt it would work, for many reasons. Firstly, it's too short. It won't make a proper story. Second, it's in FanFiction style. It leaves a cliffhanger, rhetorical question or suspense after each update, which wouldn't work in an actual book. Thirdly, nobody would take it seriously. "oh look, a story about a self harming teenager written by a thirteen year old girl! That must be brilliant." Fourthly, while you may think it is, I honestly doubt it is up to publishing standard. Maybe it is better than some other works on here, but if you compare it to writing such as the work of Suzanne Collins and J.K Rowling, it is extremely inferior.
I can't bear to see this die! But it's finished now, so I'll have to let it go. I just want to say thank you to all of my readers. YOU ARE THE BEST READERS EVER AND I LOVE EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOU! Even you, Percy dear So if anybody wants to know if or when I will be writing another story, just check the forums occasionally. I'm sure I will think of something to post on here. Yours Sincerely, ᎢᎯᎦᎻ
So Percy, you still look at this whenever it's on the first page of the forums? I thought you hated it!
People hate me so after I post I always expect someone to curse me out or respond. That's why, I have a unique gift for pissing people off.
Ah. Well I wouldn't dream of cursing at you my dear! However, I love to respond to my readers and make sure everything is simply fine and dandy with them.
@Tash Dammit..... Honestly, if I didn't hate you or your story so much, I might actually respect you as a skilled writer, no offense.