• TO NOAH • She was been thru my life, thru my problems. She been my first best friend in my entire life. I was thankful for that I met her. It was a Little disgrace that I was a over headed. It Did not seemed that she was mad at me, Never been before she got mad at me. She cared for me, all the years, till her end. 'Hey Robert, whats up?' Jessica surprised me in the school, I nodded, 'She's gone', who!? She was shocked, 'You know, she was my first love, she was the one who cared for me at all times, she never leave me alone, she always seeks everyone just to love me than anyone and anything', I told her. Oh my, condolences for her.' I saw her sorry through her eyes. Just got into the hospital, walk about to the nurse, asked politely, 'What floor is room 423?' 4th floor, second column. The nurse said. I was about to get in, but I saw the doctor and his nurses running to the room. I was in tense, now I don't know what's going to happen. 'CLEAR! 1...2...3... CLEAR!' Hearing the doctor is making me cry, this is not gonna be happening. It cannot be! I was speaking through my mind. The doctor came out. In rush and sorry. She is gone, we did everything for the sake of her, but she did gave up. I was in terror when I heard that, I did not know what to do, but to accept of what happened. In the cemetery, giving her a wonderful roses and other more flowers.. It was the last day that we were having fun at fun land, Im saying to heaven, wait for me, wait for me, I will be with you, forever. Going back to down, I'm saying these last words for her. Good bye mom, good bye, we will see each other in paradise, soon.
My only criticism it that use quotation marks and space when people are speaking like: "You get me right?" Sara said "Of course I do!" He answered. Other than that I really like it!