Jack. How can you assume no one has those things...? It's steorptyping generalizing everyone when you don't even know.. It's no excuse though, sob stories **** me off.
Did I mention anything about me being depressed or that I wanted to kill myself? No -.- so shut up. Did I say I was being abused or bullied? No again. Nor did I indicate it by my choice of words. I said I suffer from insomnia, and I didn't say it for pity. You are just being ignorant.
Skrillex; Please, follow or walk someone who has already made a story and ask them for some tips.. Then you can make a fresh story or carry on with this one and maybe you can have some more positive comments.
Skrillex, everyone suffers differentlly but most people who are the same/similar wouldn't anounce that to everyone...
No, they don't because just about everyone here is just a attention seeker. They all cry when they don't get noticed on an rp, cry when nobody reads their story and they stoop low enough to pull that act. And for insomnia girl I never once mention your name so why so defensive?
I'm just saying I don't understand what triggered that post, but I agree with you. I'm tired of everyone crying about very stupid things.
I'm not trolling or trying to be funny here. I'm completely serious and feel bad for the people that do have these things and these people pretend to have them just to get attention.
And how do you know all these people really do have these problems? Apparently you met everyone here in real life to know. And who I'm not continuing this argument on this dumpy story, pm if you wish to get logiced
Okay, I need to put some input. You still don't have any correct punctuation. Some of your words are spelled wrong. You are saying you haven't slept three days, and you have time to write this. No, if you have time to write, you have time to sleep. Don't give me crap about how your plot gets better. If you wanted to prove that, you could've wrote with some proper grammar, and correct spelling. Learn how to start off a story without implying you slept with your sister and somebody else. This is just wrong! This story is going nowhere. It is far past the point of repair. If you want to write, learn the English language, and start over new. That is all.
, guys this isn't about problems now. It's about the story, if he hasn't had sleep for 3 days he hasn't and he shouldn't really be doing this. Don't have an argument about it, different people stuffer with different things. Nobody needs to know what you or someone else suffers with. Try writing a new story after you get your grammar and punctuation right.
Not trying to be mean or anything just constructive criticism... • Fix your grammar and spelling. • If you haven't slept in three days then go to sleep. • Add paragraphs. • Change the plot because nobody really want to read a story about how a brother slept with his sister. It's inappropriate to imply adult contents and incest. • If you can't come up with anything good then ask someone to help you or do a collab. • That is not how lesbians and bi act just so you know. Just because they're lesbians and bi doesn't mean they think about inappropriate things and do them all the time. That's a bit stereotypical of you to do that. • Try to listen to some of the advice instead of being offended.
Umm -what happened to periods... 0.0 - are you in kindergarten? -I think you should stop this story it's ... Really not that great -maybe try and work on more original plots? -oh and one more word - EW!