The New Era

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *--_Hephaestus_-- (01), Nov 18, 2012.

  1. Lol yeah! What she said! 
     
  2. Fine :3 as soon as I figure out where this is gonna go
     
  3. :3 maybe I should write more?
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    The campaign, however, did not start as heroically as Tomias planned. He had successfully infiltrated a nearby camp, and was taking in the number of soldiers. His estimate was 200, from all he could see.

    Now all I need to do is make them lay down their arms, and anyone who refuses... Too bad for them he thought to himself, climbing up onto the small building that was their base.

    "Hello, dear fellow citizens!" Tomias roared through his helmet. The voice changer he had thoughtfully installed easily changed his small high voice into a strong, deep one. Tomias licked his lips nervously as all the soldiers instantly pointed their weapons at him, glad no one could tell how scared he was, though he would never admit it. "I have come here, now, to tell you that a new era is approaching! One, where war is but a whisper in the wind! All I ask is that you lay down your arms and cease fighting, follow me and I shall protect you!"

    "Shut up, pisshead!" A soldier had spoken up, and quickly released a burst if shots at Tomias' helmet. They glanced of, and Tomias whispered a quick thank you to himself, then raised his new weapon.

    "You shall be the example of my power, then." He said simply, and activated the weapon. A small flash and a dull thump ensued. After a few moments, the 'example' dropped, blood pouring out of the new hole in his chest. A woman screamed, only to be cut short by as a soldier, who had dropped his weapon hastily, clamped a hand over her mouth.

    "So, shall you join me?" Tomias questioned again. "Because only I have this power, and this power shall save mankind" He smiled gleefully to himself, watching as the people nodded slowly and the weapons we cast aside. Tomias then had an awful thought, wiping the smile away. What if the brazen soldier had shot at his chest?
     
  4. Lol, pisshead (As in what the soldier said, I'm not calling anyone that. :0 )

    I have a wierd sense of humoar. (Idk how you spell it. D: )

    Anyways,, it's good Bump!
     
  5.  I couldn't think of a good insult..
     
  6. ^.^ I really think that if this was a popular story, I'd get all the praise and adoration like most of the popular stories :3

    Though they are all romance stuff >.> not my favorite genre
     
  7. I like this. Better than the romance crap.
     
  8.  Thank you! Someone who knows what else a good story needs

    No homo for the 
     
  9. Okay... So, in case you just skipped everything ^.^ Tomias invented super weapon. Took over enemy camp. That's where we are.

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    Tomias led the captured camp back to his own the next morning, making sure there were no more rebellious tough guys. He gave them back their guns, and told them to follow him, bravado making him confident.

    At the back entrance of his own camp, Tomias was stunned. Smoke rose in heavy clouds, flames burned everywhere. Dead bodies littered the back entrance, most of them burning. He dashed in, yelling for the soldiers to secure the camp. Tomias instantly started for his secret bunker, fearing that they had discovered it in the short time he was gone. A soldier, smaller and weaker than the rest, slunk after him, wondering where the mysterious robot man would go.

    Tomias blew the door off his lab, rushing in, and groaned with relief as everything was intact, nothing had been tampered with. He turned to find a gun barrel right in his helmeted face, the camera adjusting to stare it down.

    "What is all this?" The small soldier asked roughly, half to himself. "Is this your secret base where you build yourself up?" Tomias blanched a little as that was exactly what it was, then regained his composure and, in a movement faster than the eye could follow, raised his arm and smashed the gun to the side. Aside from protecting him, the gauntlets he built also enhanced his weak muscles to superhuman levels. The gun flew out of the flinching soldiers hands and broke against the wall.

    "You should actually be asking yourself, dear boy, why you followed the one who easily killed a man twice your size." Tomias said softly, yet also somehow menacingly. The soldier cowered before him, muttering incoherently. "Speak up! I want to hear what you have to say!"

    The soldier gulped, not the first time that minute, and stood up strait. "I wanted to ask you if you could..."
     
  10. I really don't know why I continue this xD if it reaches the second page without a comment I really think nobody likes it