Out in the snow~ What can tie, can ruin the soul, out in the darkness, out in the snow. Really short one.
Wow. I like your poems. This one's mine I have walked a sword of stairs I have worn a coat of scars I have vowed with hollow words I lied my way to the stars Yours are still a lot better than mine. A lot better.
Rose And no, everyone has beautiful talent. That's what my friend says. She said everyone has other beauties just some are hard to find. She's actually the one who basically made me be a writer, etc. All poem, etc are amazing Good job!
Here's one that I wrote today. I got the inspiration after a few people (myself included) got into a fight last night. Another Day The fight may be over But the war has just begun Even though you're down Just get back up again Listen to your heart beat Faster and faster with fright But we'll protect each other All day and all night 'Cause it's another day Just another day Another we to be won Another battle to be fought It's another day
That was awesome, maybe create it into a song, it would seem catchy for it. Beautiful work! You got it.
Minds~ In the zone we are precise, of what may come next, but if could turn at any time like a dice, and that is one who can't be set. Our minds are unquestionably, insensible, undeniably, creational, and unique like no other. So if our last ties are you in the zone, and our words are in the mind, instead of working of what can bind, are you that afraid to walk alone?
Omg you guys are so good. I have no talent whatsoever.All I am is smart. •_•. I don't consider it a talent.
BUT I SHALL POST ANOTHER POEM ANYWAY!!!! Sorry my the lack of high vocabulary. I horrible at spelling. I didn't do how to spell believe until the 6th grade.
When life knocks you down It's up to you to get back up and dust yourself off Or you can stay, lounging on the ground When fate throws devastation at you face You either run around delirious Or take it into a warm embrace When destiny whispers in your ear that all will go wrong Would you turn away and coward Or stay strong Fate, Destiny,Life You believe they're innocent? Wait till you see there other side
I prove my point, as you see in my second-to-last post it makes no sense at all. I hope your minds click and automatically made the correction(s)
It does, at least to me. You shouldn't be ashamed of your writing. It comes to mind, and it's your own story to tell.
Still Self Life is learned, but one who doesn't see, feels the distraught, of someone steady plead. They are bored at your wits, and sprinkle and garnish, but are they fit? A challenge you might suppose? Or do they not see what lies beneath the unknown? I swear I see it there, when everything is still, but I feel as I am everywhere? and the cries can be so shrill. So once more I bring myself again, and try to find the true meaning of what I have dealt, and not try to still my own self.