haunted woods

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by 5yhhh5, Nov 13, 2012.

  1. It was like my life was being sucked out of me, body turning pale, body tempture slowly dropping, dizziness building up, the colors of day fading away.

    It all started when my friend(Jordan) came over to my house and asked if I wanted to hang out with him, me being a nice friend said yes without hesitation. As soon as we left my house Jordan said "let's go explore the forest". My house was pretty much a block away from the forest so me think it was close to home said "sure why not", biggest mistake of my life

    Me and Jordan ran to the forest witch was about 5 minutes away and started to ramble through the bushes and talk to each other. As we are bushwhacking I look off into the distance I see a unknown figure kind of human looking, I'd say it looked more like a ghost. I pointed it out to Jordan but by the rime he looked in that direction it was gone.

    So we continue venturing off into the woods, after me seeing this ghost like figure I'm pretty spooked. I start to feel a cold draft as I'm walking through the forest. I look to the left, nothing there , I look to the right ,nothing there but my friend, I look behind me and the ghost is right in my face, his dark transparent figure gave his identity away. He looked like Abraham linkon in my opinion, he had the top hat, the business bonka suit and the pen. I think the pen gave it away.

    I start to stick my hand through his body slowly, I'm getting scared as hell. I run as fast as I can through the forest, jumping over logs, tuning through bushes, dodging trees, and the ghost is still chasing me. I trip and fall face first towards the rough, hard terrain. As I am on the ground in true pain the ghost comes up to me and starts leaning over me.


    next thing you know It was like my life was being sucked out of me, body turning pale, body tempture slowly dropping, dizziness building up, the colors of day fading away, I can feel my soul leaving my body like a fish leaving a lake. Is this the end of my life? All because of my so called friend who bailed during the chase?
     
  2. Pls give honest feed back
     
  3. I didn't get to proofread...