Prologue *** The man stared; fire dancing in his pure black pupils. His grip tightened on the killer. The gun. A bead of sweat trickled down his forehead as he looked around, the darkness engulfing him. "I know you're out there," he said in a gruff voice, a disoriented look in his shining eyes. My heart raced as I pushed myself against the wall...He couldn't see me. He couldn't find me. Not after everything that happened to get this far... I held my breath. The rushed thud of my heart so loud, I wondered how he hadn't heard me...But then it happened. I couldn't take it any longer, the smoke filling my flared nostrils. I let out a quiet throaty cough, the smoke burning my throat... The demon sprung around. He had a pale yellow face, which looked sickly and haunting. He had thin pointy lips with a disturbing red liquid dribbling down. He was thin and shallow, but don't let the looks deceive you. He was cunning...Ever so cunning. He could manipulate, controll, and destroy his targets in the blink of an eye. I was his target. No one knew about the monster. No one but me, or so I thought. He would choose a victim and take them to his lair, where he would destroy and torture them. However, I had a plan. Too bad it went up in flames. He aimed the gun at me, his vision still strong even though it was smoky. I didn't care though, the gun was just for first impressions...I might as well enjoy this before the hell kicks in. I shut my eyes and imagined my parents inocent beautiful faces. I bit down on my swollen lip and sighed. The demon pulled back the pale blue gloves revealing claw like, black hands. "Any last words?" He smirked, cackling at the end of the question. I looked up at the grey ceiling, the spinning fan mesmering me and locking me into a trance causing my whole mind to focuse on them. My parents. A tear escaped from my eyes, full of rage and hatred. I would never forgive that monster for doing this. Never. "I'm sorry mother, I'm sorry father," I murmured then brought my head away from the ceiling, turning to glare at the sickening creature in front of me. "I hope you rot in the fiery pits of hell." That's when all **** broke loose. *** That's the first part.Tell me what you think and give constuctive critism pleaseThe next update will be in a different persons POV after this has happened. Going , unless I change my mind , to be a detective kinda story.Not got much description about the place etc though yet, as that's part of the mystery, otherwise it would reck the story. ~
Thanks I'll update soon, but haveing to write a completely new story for my English assesment so most likely wgen I've finished that