Hello, dear reader, I welcome you, But heed this: you must beware. For this day, This very hour, Something just happened, but where? The tales I will tell you May seem impossible And some are, without a doubt. But one is not, one is true, And that is what you must figure out. One of these tales is a delusion A tale told by a frightened confusion The teller cannot tell what is true That also, dear reader, is up to you. The second is by a lost lonely one, Yet, it is just a dream. She is taken by a person far away Does this truthful seem? The third one is true, That much is certain But how does it end, can you see? Three tales intertwined, Yet none of them rhyme Because they have been written by me. --------------- So, I'm thinking of writing a book series on my computer, and this is the "prologue" kind of thing. I'm wondering if maybe I could get some feedback on it. Thanks!
Here it goes...just introducing characters. CHAPTER 1 I shut my computer. It was late at night, and I needed my sleep for the chemistry test tomorrow. "Good night," I told my parents as I walked up the stairs. "Night Alice," my mother mumbled, not looking up from her computer. Dad didn't even glance my way. I walked up the stairs to my room, sat on my bed, and cried. Why can't they notice anything? After an hour of bringing out my troubles, I fell onto my pillow, asleep. ~~~~~~~ I woke up disoriented. This isn't my room. "Hello, Sophie," a small voice said. It was coming from the corner of the room. "Who's there?" I stood up. Suddenly, a bright light blinded me. "What's going on?" I shouted. I heard a bit of laughter. "He's coming to get you." The voice said. "Who?" "You're father." ~~~~~~~ "My name is Olivia." I said to the boy in front of me. "But most people call me Liv." "I'm Derrick." The guy smiled. He was tall, brown hair, brown eyes. "It's nice to meet you." "Nice to meet you too," I responded. "So," he glanced back at our high school. "Are you doing anything tomorrow?" "No," I shrugged. "Well, not besides homework and cleaning up after my little brother and his friends." "Great." Derrick said. "Want to go see a movie?" "Sure." "I'll pick you up at eight." ~~~~~~~~~~~ You've met the three Now search and find Find the one The twist to unwind.