 My Lovers Secret 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-_Deep_Fried_Oreo_- (01), Nov 3, 2012.

  1. Here's the next update!
     
  2. I threw on random clothes, I wanted to rush to see what Kelsey's plan was. I'm pretty sure I left my shirt wrong side out but I didn't care, I rushed downstairs and joined everyone in the living room.

    Kelsey's plan was to high tail it to the city, an hour or so of a drive and get a hotel room for the night. It seemed like a good idea, and my car was big enough but what about my dad? " should I call my dad?" I asked looking at Kelsey, " you could but you wouldn't have to explain everything. Leave him a note" she said with confidence " what about you guys? What will you all sleep in? I could lend some of my stuff and my dads but it might be too big or too small" Kelsey grinned " don't worry about it, we'll worry about it when the time comes, just go pack, Avery"

    I rushed upstairs, running to my room to grab my bag, I threw random clothes and everything else I needed into my duffle. I quickly changed clothes, and walked back down to the others, I grabbed one of my pull over hoodies from off the couch and blew out the candles. I grabbed my keys "do you feel okay to drive, Avery?" Justin asked me at the door, I thought for a minute, I was tired " you can" I tossed him the keys and took off to my car.
     
  3. Nice. Connor is getting way to creepy. Kinds reminds me of Mark Walbergs character in the movie Cape Fear.
     
  4. I'll have the next update soon! And thanks!
     
  5. Keep up the good work
     
  6. Thanks, I'm working on the next update
     
  7. Awesum! Plz update!
     
  8. please update!!!
     
  9. Sorry guys, my account got silenced so ill be on my alternative one. I'm working on the next update now!
     
  10. I now have a small update ready!!
     
  11. Justin got in the drivers seat while I examined the entirety of the car, I placed my bag in the trunk before joining Justin in the passenger seat. Kelsey sat behind me and everyone else seemed to scrunch together, Kelsey quickly went back to her hilarious self "SUFFOCATION! You guys are like one big kid put together" everyone started laughing as we drove off.

    I don't remember much of the drive since I got caught up with much needed sleep, which probably meant that I would be up all night now, great. Once I awoke we was at a Holiday Inn, and the main question in my head was 'is there a pool?' I looked around for one, where one may be while Justin checked us in.

    The clerk handed us our key "room 218" and Kelsey and I rushed to the elevator, leaving everyone behind. We pressed each button on the elevator before exiting and we took off to find our room, soon remembering that Justin had the key. We sat down at the door while we waited, we started poking each other, which scared Kelsey every time I did causing her to make her self proclaimed 'Sasquatch grunt' which sounded extremely hilarious.
     
  12. Lol, update again!!!
     
  13. Hey just cause your silenced doesn't mean you can't post on the forum. I've been silenced for the last two weeks.
     
  14. It was my second perm silence so I just figured I would put use to this one. I'll have an update in the morning! I'm working on a long one for all of you who support this story! I love you all, you're awesome. Thank you, guys.
     
  15. I see. Ok. Oh check out my story. It doesn't have as much detail as you but its just as long. Its called the long war
     
  16.  I love it so far !

    Connor is creepy ...

    Update !
     
  17. Update. Its getting better every time.
     
  18. Here it is as promised, a long update!