When Will You Notice Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Lol may Adam chill 
     
  2. -.- Then let these writers wrote what they want and stop complaining about the clichés... If yu domt wanna cliché then write yur own story...
     
  3. MAYIT'S OKAY! It's just Adam
     
  4. Omfg it's amazing!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. Because in literature, the basis for a well-written story, requires the least cliches possible. A literature book will tell you that.
     
  6. -.- dude just let them write the cliché stories they like... its their story not yurs, now like i said before if yu dont like the clichés then write a story in yur view of well written literature
     
  7. U tell him may!
     
  8. I'm not taking away their rights. I'm not preventing them from writing it. I'm not going to give them all acclamation, when they all have many errors and cliches. A few are okay, but that many is just...you know where I'm going with this.
     
  9. -.-" no i dont.... but if yu want well written literature then write yur own story
     
  10. I do write my own. But if you write, I think their should be effort, and not so many errors in cliches. If you cared that is.
     
  11. And* See, we all make errors. But, at least I don't make that many. O.O
     
  12. O.O actually i do write.... and i do make mistakes like it happens... but pointing out that its another highschool cliché isnt really nessecary cuz i think the know since they are the writers 
     
  13. V update!!!
     
  14. AMAZING! Plz update
     
  15. Update plz!!!!!!!
     
  16. Update:
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    Macy's Pov:

    What just happened? Was he trying to kiss me? I laughed at the silly thought. Yea right him? Wanna kiss me?! That's crazy he was probably trying to whisper something. It just felt so good to have him that close to me. I blushed thinking if how he had held my chin, what was he trying to say?

    I sat down in first period day dreaming of a fairytale where I was the princess being saved by my Prince Charming. I shooed those thought away. Macy focus he's a player you saw how he had Ann and Beth all over him. I grimaced those bitchy slut, ugh I hate them.

    "Macy?" I looked over at Dana.

    "Yea?"

    "You okay? Your like staring blankly at the wall.... It's kinda freaking me out! Haha but it looks like your thinking of someone special," Dana giggled.

    "Yea he's special alright," I blushed. No matter what I couldn't stopped thinking about him. He was forever in my heart and mind.
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    Ik it's short but hey it's an update
     
  17. Bump!!!!!