My last hope

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Orisel (01), Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Hope you enjoy my first adventure story about a boy who gets selected to die next. 

    I just stared. I couldn't speak, just cry and stare. Tears filling my light blue eyes. My bare feet, hurting from all of the running. I watched in horror as the blade went down on her neck. Blood splattered everywhere. I felt dizzy and I saw black.

    I awoken with my best friend, Louise, stood over me.
    "Dude?" she laughed
    "Loui..."
    I tried to say her name, but couldn't.
    "Don't talk, just sleep..."
    I closed my eyes as another nightmare drew in

    I woke up in Louise's guest bed. Tired, I tried to drift off again when I heard "AHHH"
    It was Louise! Peeking through her door, I saw the same man that was in my dreams, trying to kill Louise. Without thinking, I grabbed one of her great granddads golden samurai swords and charged at him. Immediately, I saw black again. I heard Louise scream for the last time, but didn't see anything


    Quite a long starter update  give feedback
     
  2. Poo,

    anything.**