Indigo

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by jacilu2, Nov 4, 2012.

  1. I needs more ppl to read!
     
  2. Yes!!!! First on page 3!!!!!!
     
  3. Great i loved every word of it.
     
  4. When will it be updated
     
  5. I just updated!!!!!
     
  6.  two identities =D
     
  7. How did u know?!?!?!
     
  8. UPDATE
    Indigos POV
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    She rubbed her hand along the edge of the knife cleaning off the blood. She began to talk to it as she poured more bleach, "No one understands me. You're the only one my little knife. You understand my thirst for blood, for death."
    As she laid it on the shelf she whispered, "Sleep well, we have a big day tomorrow." She laughed menacingly.

    Scarlets POV
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    The house smelled of bleach that morning. It was strongest in the shed. She glanced at the TV and saw a news update.
    "14 year old Cassie and her 16 year old brother Adam Jones were found dead on their front steps this morning with the words, you don't understand, etched into their chests. Their hands were clasped together tightly."
    Scarlet didn't understand what was going on in her little town. She could swear the bleach smell was stronger.

    Dawns POV
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    Dawn felt the rough pavement beneath her arms. She looked up at her attackers indigo eyes. "Scarlet please!" she pleaded, "don't do this!"
    She thought she saw a shift in the eyes. They were blue, but flashed back to Indigo quickly. The knife handle hit her head and she slumped to the ground.
     
  9. Wat does bump mean?
     
  10. Ohhhh more. Im at the edge of my seat.
     
  11. U have to wait til tomorrow afternoon 
     
  12. BUMP
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  13. Ok I can't resist
    UPDATE
    Scarlets POV
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    She woke up screaming. Her neck was slick with sweat. All she could think about was last night. Dawn in the old mill tied up with blood dropping down from her head. It was just a nightmare she told herself just a...she screamed. She had reached for a book and a knife with dried up blood fell to the floor.
    Scarlet walked down the street in the bitter cold of October to the old mill. She had on a hat, mittens, and a jacket zipped up to her throat. She held her breath as she opened the door.

    Dawns POV
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    She cowered in fear as Scarlet came in. "It's ok she said, it's just me." Scarlet untied the ropes that bound Dawns feet and hands together. "Run!" Scarlet screamed, "Run while you still can!" She looked at Scar in confusion. What was wrong with her? She bolted out the door. Whatever it was she didn't want to know.

    Indigos POV
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    She stalked up to the front door of 302 Winschester Street. She stuck the tip of the blade into the lock and turned it slowly so she wouldn't wake the girl. When she heard the click she opened the door and walked into Dawns bedroom. The girl stirred and sat up seeing Indigo.
    She had to admit the girl had spirit. When she walked toward her she grabbed Indigos wrist and twisted side sweeping her legs out from under her. When Dawn tried to run Indigo grabbed her ankle twisting her leg. There was a cracking sound and she smiled. Dawn screamed in pain dragging herself up the stairs, constantly kicking her with her good leg. By the time Dawn reached the top Indigo was on top of her. Dawn screamed.
    "Scarlet please don't kill me!!"
    She laughed menacingly. "I won't kill you not yet anyway." She grabbed Dawns shoulders and slammed her head back, knocking her unconscious.
     
  14. Plz leave feedback!!!
     
  15.  but I got scared... And daddy was right ^-^ two identities I've heard about it,.., >_< creeped out
     
  16. UPDATE
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    Dawn woke to see the indigo eyes and the glint of a knife. She screamed and tried to run but Indigo stopped her. Dawn saw there was a window but the drop would be a swift sudden death. There wasn't any moonlight it was new moon time. Dawn saw the knife move.

    She ducked swinging out her good leg to knock down Indigo. She jumped and grabbed Dawns leg. She screamed in pain. Indigo yanked knocking Dawn to the ground. Dawn crawled away but it was no use Indigo was faster. Dawn was sobbing now.
    "Scarlet I know you're in there please don't do this!"
    Dawn watched the eyes flicker. She realized maybe Scar could fight her off.
    "Come on Scar you can fight her I know you can."
    The flickers had more blue. Scarlet was fighting Indigo inside herself. Scarlet screamed and the knife clattered to the floor.

    Scarlets POV
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    Dawn limped to hug her. Scar hugged her back. She's gone, was all she could think, thank god. Dawn smiled and Scar smiled back. Scar bent down picking up the knife. Suddenly she surged forward toward Dawn. Dawn, confused and shocked, stumbled backward right out the open window.
    Scarlet reached for her but only grasped air. The two girls screams were drowned out by thunder.
     
  17. Lol Therese
     
  18. FINAL UPDATE
    Scarlets POV
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    She pulled the covers back and slipped into her bed. It had been almost a month since Dawn died. The full moon shone brightly through her bedroom window. Scarlet smiled she knew she would never kill anyone again. She fell asleep thinking of Dawn.

    Indigos POV
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    She stood over the sleeping girl. Scarlet had escaped her during the new moon when she was at her weakest, but tonight when she was her strongest she would have revenge. She moved a lock of Scarlets red hair behind her ear. As she held the knife above her head she whispered, "If only you would understand." Scarlet never woke again.

    Authors POV
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    What happened to Scarlet you might ask? Indigo killed her in her sleep. She went off to find a new body. Scarlet had never completely gotten rid of Indigo. Indigo was at her weakest during new moon(when Scarlet fought her out) and at her strongest during the full(when Scar died).
    ........................Are you feeling well? Your eyes look a little...indigo.
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    I hope you all enjoyed my story