"Move it men the war isnt gonna last forever" Sgt. Nickel yells as machine guns and bombs go off all around him.
Longer, proofread, more detail, punctuation, spelling, grammar, seperate speaking and paragraphs and seriously put effort into it it's not a joke.
Did you accidentally press post? Because I have no idea if that was the story or just something random.
I look up at Sgt. Nickels "Sir we can't move half our men are injured and can't move." "Private you will keep your yap sh." Sgt. Nickel says just as a enemy sniper takes his life and makes me the highest ranking man that has any leadership skills
I look around and notice that the only other non-injured man in the platoon is my friend Renegade. He's the platoon medic and is busy tending to Lt. Sharp the platoon leader. "Joe what happened to Nickels?" "Sniper got him." "Jesus. This is fubar man. We walked right into a ambush" Renegade yells over the sound of machine gun rounds hoping to find a target.