Hi guys this is my first story! I'm sorry if its bad and I love criticism so please comment! 30 years earlier... The blood stained Walls were still damp from this mornings massacre, the stale odour of death lay softly in the air as the breeze danced through the floor boards, setting of the sound of eerie creaks that echoed through the whole house. The Johnson family lay motionless less in there family home as a sinister evil leaked through the Walls, the causer of all this destruction swiftly evacuated through a small window in the top bedroom before falling to his well sentenced death. The house would be cursed with these ghosts forever... Sorry it's short! I will post again soon! Please comment and thanks
This is amazing. Longer updates would be nice, but I don't see anything wrong with your story. Great job!
Ok so I decided to read your story and I really do like it. It's got great attention to detail, though it's short my attention has been captured. Though I have a few questions and concerns. 1. Is there supposed to be more than 3-4 sentences? 2. Why is the w in walls capitalized like a name? Is it a character in the story like the house sees all and such? But otherwise I like it continue