The Homecoming Date

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Treasure-, Oct 22, 2012.

  1. This is one of my first stories.! I hope you enjoy it!
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    Look, I'm not your average girl.
    I don't deal to well with others and I'm mostly called an outcast at school.

    "Tylie! Tylie! Tylie!" Rachel called out running down the school hall to my locker, with a Flyer in her hand.

    Rachel has been my best friend since 6th grade. We do everything together. From Vacations to drooling over boys.

    "Haha hey Rachel!" I said as I took books our of my locker for English, my 6th period class.

    "LOOK!" she gave me the flyer.
    It read, "East wood Home Coming Dance!"

    "I'm not intersted in some stupid school dance!" I said as I gave Rachel back the flyer and closed my locker. Standing right there was Jack Henderson.

    Jack Henderson was the captain of the football team. He was sweet and sensitive, yet strong and manly at the same time. He had shaggy dark brown hair and hypnotizing Midnight blue eyes. He was perfect. He had all good grades and was sweet to everyone.

    "Hey Tylie!" He said with a charming smile.

    "huh? Hey..Jack!" I said. He had woke me out of my daydream.

    He closed his locker and head down to Mr.Reid's class. Mr. Reid was the English teacher for 10th grade.

    I started walking down the hall with Rachel.
    "Oh My God! He is so hot! Did you see the way he looked at you?!" Rachel said excitedly.

    "Hey losers, who's this guy your talking about?" Samantha said.

    Samantha was the most Rich girl in the 10th grade which instantly made her The most popular.

    "Jack Henderson!" Rachel replied.

    I wanted to ignore them but I didn't wanna leave Rachel behind.

    "No way! He would never talk to girls like you!" Samantha said with a smirk and walked past us knocking my shoulder back.

    I rolled my eyes and walked to 6th period and sat down. Rachel sat down beside me and the bell rang. When Jack sat right in front of me.
     
  2. ^.^ bump baby bump
     
  3. BUMP I ALREADY SAW THIS!
     
  4. ME GUSTA MUCHO
     
  5. BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. UPDATE
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    Jack turned around after Mr.Reid said to get out our notebooks and a pencil.
    "Hey, can I borrow a pencil?" He whispered.

    I gave him my pencil and he turned back around. I quickly looked at Rachel. I needed to borrow pencil since I gave Jack the only one I had. She slipped me the pencil.
    •••••••Later••••••

    The bell rang and everyone piled into the halls and rushed to their lockers. The last bell was the craziest time off day. Everyone wanted to get home, except for me.

    I put some books in my book bag and closed my locker. Standing there with Jack was Alex, Samantha, Courtney and Taylor.

    Alex was Jack's Best friend.Courtney and Taylor were Samantha's Followers.

    Jack smiled and waved at me. As I smiled and waved back Samamtha gave me a look and rolled her eyes.
    ••••

    Rachel and I were neighbors so we walked to school and back together everyday.

    I went inside and up to my room. I threw my bag onto my bed and I saw goop on my pillow. I picked it up and ran downstairs to my mom.
    "Mom, Bradley put goop on my pillow!" I said upset and gave her the pillow.

    "I did not!" shouted Bradley from the kitchen.

    Bradley was my 8 year old brother. He was the most annoying little kid in the world. There was also Sarah, my older sister. She just graduated High school.
    Yes, I'm the middle child.

    I went back up stairs and slammed my bedroom door shut. I fell back onto my bed as my phone rang. I answered,
    "Hey!"
    "Sup Tylie! I asked Rachel for your number. I wanted to talk to you!" Jack said happily.
     
  7. 0.0 whoooooo
     
  8. , FIRST AND PAGE 2 AND WHAT! IN YO FACE!
     
  9. Bump and update!
     
  10. BUUUUUUMMMP!!!!! DO IT NOWW!!! >_> or else!
     
  11. ._. i forgot to put "Update"
     
  12. UPDATE
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    "Oh hey Jack!" I smiled and wondered what he wanted to talk to me about.
    "Tylie, Would you like to go out for coffee with me tomorrow after school? I'd like to get to know you more."
    He said. I was stunned. Why would he want to hang out with someone like ME?!

    "Yeah totally!" I hung up and rushed down stairs and to the front door.

    "Where you think your going Tylie?" Sarah said with crossed arms.

    "To Rachel's house! I need to borrow a text book!"

    I opened the Left and ran to Rachel's house. Her mom let me in and ran up to her room.
    "Guess what?!" I said with a big smile.
    "OMG! What?" she replied
    "Jack asked me to have coffee with him tomorrow after school! I said yes!" we both squealed and jumped up and down.
     
  13. Oh my waffles!!! So good! I'm guessing Bradley is your brother Bradley? Omg I love 2PM
     
  14. I'm serious update!!!!

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