Who should I choose???

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *madelinnicoledavis (01), Oct 16, 2012.

  1. Yay everyone just keep bump 
     
  2. I really like it. Bump!
     
  3. A giant hippo appeared on the table and it was eating the food. I just stared In awe . That was a surprise for sure.
    I look at Zevin and he also is staring in awe.
    I say" well do I have surprise element"
    " yes you do but we still have to see if I do"He says
    Then he closes his eyes and ontop of the hippo was a flamingo or I think that's what it was. It was pink but with long hair on its head and there were blue highlights in it. It had no wings and a air sighn on it.
    I say" what is that ??!!"
    He says " I don't know"
    I say " well there's a surprise"
    He said " yes but what does it mean if we both have the surprise element "
    " has that ever happened before" I say
    " I-I don't know" he says " we will have to figure out though or we won't know if this is dangerous or not"
    I say" what do you mean dangerous "
    He says " well powers are weird like that some are ok and some are dangerous so we will have to find out"
    I say" but I don't want it to be dangerous what will happen if it is and we cant even be around each other or-or-or" I couldn't finish because I burst out crying because I didn't want to be away from Zevin .
    He comes over and says" shhh it's ok we don't know for sure it's alright don't cry" and he hugs me but it didn't help .
    I couldn't stand not being around him how did this happen i know we are rare elements and all this mess but it shouldn't keep us apart it cant.
    At the thought of this I cryed even more.
    After a while he says" how about we go to one of the library's and figure this out and then we will get some lunch ."
    I nod my head and he wipes the tears off my face and he gets my hand and we are flying. I could see the city now and it was huge from up here! All you could see is buildings . Then we start going down and we land in front of a building I could tell it was the library because there were books everywhere .
    We walked in and Zevin went to ask about elemant books when I felt chaos and ran towards the opposite way . All the way wondering what would happen .
     
  4. Does anyone still read this 
     
  5. Me! I love this story!
     
  6. Yay lol I will update later probally but it will be a whole cause i started another story
     
  7. I ran and ran until finally I found in the back a bunch of people huddled up in a corner. Beside then was a huge wolf like creature but with the chaos symbol on its back.
    I screamed really loud do that Zevin could hear me then turned to see the wild staring at me I closed my eyes and said invisible in my head and ran to the front of the wolf .
    We were face to face now and I screamed " fire " and fire exploded all in the Wolfs face and I quickly flew above it .
    I shot vines all over it to keep it trapped and then saw Zevin running towards me. I pointed a the creature and mouthed out what is that.
    He shrugged his shoulders . Great I thought another unknown evil creature .
    He said some kind of spell and it disappeared .
    " I got the book" he said .
    " well don't just sit here! Read it!" I said right back I was a little mad these creatures keep appearing like this.
    He said" I did and it said its ok but we have another problem now"
    " what is if" I said wondering how anything else could go wrong after everything else that had happened that day.
    He said " I think apophosis is rising and before you ask he is the evil wizard and wizards ate way more powerful than us so we will have to fight his minions and eventually him but to start off we might need to fly over town and see if we sense anything and we will have to call all the good wizards to help "
    " o-ok " I manage to say . Since when are wizards real and when did he say he could sense chaos ? I didn't know but I kept going along with it not bothering with asking questions.
    All day long we got rid of the minions and finally he said " ok we will have to call the wizard Anubis first since he can get word around faster and he will fight with us as much as possible since I've known him so long.
    I nod my head not knowing who Anubis is when suddenly a guy our age showed up out of nowhere .
    " hello" he said" I'm Anubis who are you oh Wait that's Zevin " then he turns to me and says" but who are you well it don't matter anyway so what was I called for "
    I just stared in awe. This guy was as cute as Zevin!
    Anubis stared at me and finally said " well then I guess you will have to tell me who you are "
    " I- I am madelin the new leader" I manage to say.
    " oooohhhh ok so I see you are taken I was hoping you weren't you are rather pretty" he said and smiled" Zevin I will send out that message for you " and he winks and Zevin was glaring at him probally because of what he said about me .
    He said " well I guess we better get going before more minions destroy the place"
    " ok " I said and before anything I am out the city and in a place where there is nothing to be seen for miles and miles around.
    Then I hear the voice of Anubis say" I have to tell you something but I can't tell Zevin or he would freak out"
    And that's when I scream.
     
  8. what's going happen Ik but udk
     
  9. Anubis said " shhh it's ok it's just me I have to tell you that I'm sending a ultimate element with y'all I no y'all thought y'all were the only ones well your not and he is yalls age I guess so it will be ok but you have to take care of him or else I will have to call off all the wizards got it"
    " got it " I said
    " good by sweetie " he says and winks at me and I was about to start a fight then and there but I was flying back to were I was earlier.
    " There you are!" Zevin screamed" were did you go?"
    " Anubis pulled me out of here to somewhere else"I said
    He says" oh I'm going to get him one day always doing that you know he takes every one away from me well not this time I know your strong enough to fight him so anyways what did he say"
    I said" he sent someone with me but not sure were he is or what he looks like or who he is I just know it's a he"
    Then I hear a voice say" pssss over here"
    I look behind some bushes and see someone back there I say " what is it with you elements and bushes?"
    Zevin shrugs his shoulders and then the boy steps out " I'm Zach " he says
    " hey Zach" I say and then tell Zevin about him being an ultimate in hiding and everything else anubis told me. He seemed to get expecially mad when I told him Anubis called me sweetie and started making fists and murmuring something under his breath .
    Then I say" well now what do we do "
    Zevin says" find Anubis "
    Zach finally says " why he seemed pretty nice to me"
    Zevin said " I just need to talk with him about something " making fists and murmuring something under his breath again.
    I rolled my eyes. So what the boy had a crush on me? Me and Zevin weren't really dating yet . I knew this was just the beginning of this though .
    Then Zach said" I know were he is he told me incase of emergencys to go there he won't be there for another hour or two though"
    " good take us there I want to surprise him before I beat him" Zevin said.
    Wow I thought this is going to be bad . Why over me I mean seriously you call me sweetie and you get beat up that's probally a warning though .
    I said" so I guess we're going to Anubis house "
    " of course we are now we just follow Zach there "Zevin said an we looked at Zach .
    He said" ok follow me " and took off flying and we followed.
    Wow we will be best friends in no time if he keeps agreeing with us like this I think and almost fall but get balanced again.
    =============== new character  go to sighn ups to be in this some won't get a part though but plenty open right now.
     
  10. I will update later and add you magicians in 
     
  11. Ok need more magicians go to sighn up ppl
     
  12. Its a great story!
     
  13. Just capitalization and punctuation. :) Other than that, good job!
     
  14. As we get there to go in Anubis house we see him walking out with a group of people behind him .
    He smile " surprise visit yay!" and we just stare at him . I assumed that all the people were wizards because they looked more powerful just like Anubis had when we first met him. There were four girls and five guys an I noticed one of the girls were in a wheelchair and it was floating in mid air. That's cool I thought and turned back towards Anubis .
    " oh yes let me introduce you this is Saddie beside her is Luke . Behind him is Lexi and beside her is Matthew. Beside him is Atom and the one in the wheel chair is Victoria . Behind everyone else over there the two holding hands is Carter and Zia." he smiles and stares at me.
    After a long silence I say" well hey I'm Madelin ".
    Then the others said there names and Zevin said" I want each of you to go to one of the eight sections of our city and if you sense chaos then go towards it and two of you will have to go together"
    " us!" yelled carter and zia at the same time.
    Everyone rolled their eyes.
    " of course they go together " muttered saddie.
    Then everyone flys off...... Except Anubis .
    Him and Zevin have a stare off for what seemed like hours and then finally anubis said" well I better get to my station " and flys off before anyone can protest .
    Then I break the silence and say" I don't know about y'all but I'm going to starve if I don't get something to eat" and fly off . Until I far about three feet from where I was before.
    " owww " I complain and rub my head.
    " are you ok" Zevin yells running over to me.
    I try to concentrate real hard on flying and I almost fall again. This time Zevin caught me right before I hit my head and I became dizzy.
    He says" Zach ! Use this and call the number 357 and say that we need help and hang up." An throws some device towards him .
    He catches it and says" got it " and dials the numbers .
    Later a carriage comes by and picks us all up takes us somewhere and I couldn't see that well so I was trying to make out were we where but I still couldn't see.
    In the middle of walking I pass out and then everything goes black.
    I woke up in a room and see three people . I see Zevin and Zach but I also see someone in a nurses outfit and I sit up .
    " your awake!" Zevin said as he rushes over to hug me. I smile and ask " why am I here?"
    He says" your powers weren't working and that is not supposed to happen "
    " oh " I said and looked around the room was gray and that's it no colors no nothing .
    Then the nurse said" but we think we know what caused it but you may not like it"
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    SPOILER ALERT
    Hope you enjoyed I added wizards in and you will be back later but in a battle I said to much already 