The Stalker From the Past

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Treasure-, Oct 19, 2012.

  1. Lots of grammatical errors but other wise this is really amazing!
     
  2. O,O 5 year old kris a killer??? WTF!?
     
  3. Lol I know I'm not the best at writing! But yes mom SHE'S A KILLER
     
  4. UPDATE AGAIN! 
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    We didn't know. Kris had killed the neighbor's dog. What has gotten into her? She's never acted this way before.

    I sat by the window while Liz was eatting. I looked out and there..I saw a face. 2 faces... Yuki and Nick had showed up. We called Nick when ever we needed some protection. He loved his weapons. Yuki just likes to tag along.

    Nick and Yuki came in. Nick set a bag full of weapons on the floor. Yuki went over to Kristen. She made her giggle.

    I got up and looked in the bag and hid it in the corner. I didn't want anyone to know that we had it.
    "So this good?" Nick asked.
    "Yeah Thanks!" I said. I gave him and Yuki each a hug before they left.

    Then I hear a loud bang bang bang on the door. I opened the door and he was there. Pointing a gun at...me. Liz hid with Kris but there was no speaking. Before I knew it. My world went black...

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    IS SHE DEAD?!
     
  5. BUMP  where did I go!
     
  6. A place... 
     
  7. LET MY GUESS SHE GOT PISTOL WHÌPPED!
     
  8. UPDATE! Don't know how there was a gun in the hospital tho! So don't ask!
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    My eyes opened. My vision was blurry but I saw lights on the ceiling. I was in a hospital. The doctor came over and said, "Glad your awake!"
    "W..Where am I?" I asked
    "A hospital!, you were shot. We stiched you up already! Just be careful. It's a miracle that you lived!"

    I felt my head. There was stitches in my forehead. I started crying.

    Tristan, Liz, Kris, May, and Karl entered the room as the doctor left. They were surrounded around the bed asking questions like, "Are you okay?"
    And "Did it hurt?" The only one silent was Tristan. I reached over to him and grabbed his hand and smiled. He was here for me and not going anywhere. I just know it.

    He bent down and kissed my forehead softly. I smiled and said, "Yes I'm fine guys! I'm happy I lived! I'm also happy that I have such great friends!"
    We all had a group hug and I smiled widely.

    Standing the door way was Allan... How does he know where we are? Is he stalking us? I just wanna kill him.

    I reached over beside me and grabbed a gun and pointing it at Allan. Everyone moved to the side as Allan got closer.

    I pulled the tigger...
     
  9. 0.0. WHERE THE HELL IS BAD ASS ANGI
     
  10. UPDATE! (She's coming in the next update angi)
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    Like I said my vision was blurry...I shot him. It went through his heart and he fell to the floor. May and Karl ran to his side. It wasn't Allan that was shot... It was Alex... He escaped from Angi...

    I cupped my hands and burried my face in them crying. I killed Alex... I loved Alex. He was like a brother to me. Now he's dead! All because of me....

    Tristan stayed when everyone left the room to give us privacy. He hugged me a couple times and kissed me. I was still crying. He wiped away my tears.

    I can't bring Alex back to life.... This was the day I changed....
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    It's too short to make it one so I added the other to it!
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    A few weeks past... I never left my house after that. Liz lived with me now and May,Karl, and Tristan visited everyday. Kristen was sent to live with our aunt Aly. We haven't seen Allan since the day he shot me. Until today...

    I was sitting in the living room watching the news when I heard the front door open. I thought it was Tristan.
    "Hey I'm in here!" I called out to him.
    He walked in and he was in my house. Allan was here in my home! I panicked and fell to the floor. I grabbed random things to throw at him. I hit him a couple times and the rest missing. I crawled backwards him coming closer and closer to me.

    My back hit a wall. I was cornered. My face was a sheet of terror. Allan bent down and gave me a shot. I blacked out.
     
  11. 0.0 I better be angi getting fiesty yes angi kitty getting fiesty
     
  12. Omg! Update now before I die!!
     
  13. UPDATE!  getting crazy....
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    I woke up and I was tied up in a chair in a dim lighted room. Liz was hung on the wall with chains. My nightmare....it's true.

    Allan and Angi walked in. Angi circled around me in the chair. My mouth was taped shut. I looked over at Liz and she was scared to death. I knew I had to be the brave one.

    I stood up with the chair on me still and backed up to the walk breaking the chair and coming lose. I then punched Allan and looked at Angi.
    "He's using you! He doesn't love you! Once he gets his revenge then he will leave you!" I yelled at Angi. She gave me a look.

    Allan then nodded his head. "She's right..." He lifted his gun and clicked it. He aimed for Angi, but didn't shoot.

    Angi moved and released Liz realizing I was right. Liz ran out so it was just Allan, Angi, and Me.
    Allan pulled Kris out from the dark corner. She was tied up and crying.
    "Do you wanna die, or do you want Kris over her to?" he asked.

    I kicked Allan. Angi grabbed Kris and ran. It was now Allan and I left in the room.
    "What do you want from Liz?" I asked
    "Nothing from Liz..."
    "Then why won't you leave us alone?"
    "Because I want May..."
    "No! You can't have anything or anyone from us!"

    I left the room worried. I met Angi, Kris, and Liz outside. Little did I know he had Tristan...
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    Tristan's POV

    I was tied up in a dark corner of the room. I had just saw everything. I couldn't make so much of a noise to get their attention. No one knew I was in there. Except for Allan. I know why Grace is so stressed out about this.

    Her parents died 3 years ago. She has had to be brave. She had to take care of her sister. She has no support. Except for Liz and I. Now she has to deal with keeping us safe.

    Allan came over to me held a knife up to my throught. "Don't....please..." I cried following a gulp.
    "Why shouldn't I?"

    We locked eyes and he backed down. Allan left and went into another room where I heard a scream. It sounded familiar.

    It...it.... Was Hannah.....
     
  14. Nice but :( I'm no longer badass
     
  15. Yes you are....
     
  16. Omg! Don't leave me hanging!
     
  17. ANGI IS A BADASS IN MINE!!