I walked towards the house, trying to look brave. "I don't think she has the courage!" the other girls teased.Opening the door, I looked in. It was nothing until I saw the scariest thing... A hand. I tried to run but it grabbed me. I tried to scream but no words came out. I was being dragged and all I could do was helplessly sit motionlessly. "Kristen? Are you alright?" the girls asked, worried. "umbh." I spoke. It was all I could say as everything went dark. I couldn't see. Then something grabbed my leg. I tried to flick it off but it attacked my face making me sleepy. So sleepy... Tiredd.......
It's good but when u make new paragraphs double return it so it's easier to tell. And make the updates longer.