An Angel's Blood

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Justinthewolf, Oct 20, 2012.

  1. Remian walked down the dark alley accompanied by Rhythian. "I don't like this place," Remian said his teeth chattering. "I know Rem, but we have to get out of this city, it's no longer safe, and you know that. It will get better, I promise" Rhythian reassured his little brother. They saw a light ahead. "Look we're out! We're safe!" Remian cheered. "Rem,that's not the end that's something else! Move!" Rhytian yelled while shoving his brother to the side. They heard the most horrible screaming, and then there was silence.
     
  2. First bump Justin! It's really good! Bump!
    Just spaces in between dialogues and you're good to go!
     
  3. I know I forgot to post the revised one
     
  4.  That's alright. It's still great!
     
  5. Bump

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  6. Bring up my post* 
    Justine well done its pretty good :D continue!!
    Bumpdate
     
  7. Thanks guys! Once my friend writes his part ill post it as soon as I can
     
  8. (Oh btw this is Justin just on my alt/sister's account)
     
  9. Okay I couldn't wait for him to write so I went and made an update right…now
     
  10. Will and Jem walked through New York City. "Where are we going again?" Jem asked. "Broadway," Will replied to his brother. "locum ludos et musicals," Jem said in Latin. "Do you think we can get in without trouble?" Will asked. "Hopefully," Jem replied. They went around to the back entrance. Jem started to pick the lock when they heard a terrible screaming. They saw a bright light. The light cut off and so did the screaming. It was silent.
     
  11. Just keeps getting better 
     
  12. The updates will be longer when I introduce all the characters
     
  13. Thanks everyoneWriting used to be my least favorite subjectbut I found a good twist that I likeyou'll find out later
     
  14. Double Update Saturday
     
  15. Tess and Camille grew up together on the streets of L.A. They fought for food. They did everything together, but the odd thing was, that out of all the other children (see update 1 and 2) they were not sibling. When they were sixteen they each auditioned for a play. Only Tess got a call back, but she didn't make it in. When they were 17 they auditioned for a movie. They both made it in. It gave them enough money for a small apartment and food. They kept getting in movies to get more money. Now they are 18 and live in a penthouse.

    "Hey, Tess?" "Yeah?" "I heard they are filming Hangover 3! Want to go see the set?" "Sure lets go!" They walked to the set. Still having the instinct to make sure nothing is following them. This time there was. There was a flash of blinding white light and a ear-piercing scream. Then everything was silent.