Knock Knock

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *stay_classy--- (01), Oct 19, 2012.

  1. Nice dear. Your getting better with practice!
     
  2. UPDATE NIW AND REMEMBER I SHALL KILL U IN CC IF U KILL ME
     
  3. I wasn't going to kill you!
     
  4. (that's what I thought ^.^
     
  5. Lol kris and angi! I love y'all
     
  6. BUMPDATE[/colorJustinWolf
     
  7. Why u no work color thing! Gahhh
     
  8. Lol Idk..i just learned how to do it tho
     
  9. UPDATE UPDATED!!

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    Angi's POV
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    "Man that bullet was close" I think to myself. "AHHHHHHH" i yell at the top of my lungs.

    "Put tape on her mouth" James ordered

    Andrew was a bit hesitant "NOW!" James yelled

    Andrew got the tape "no no please don't" i begged. Next thing I know my mouth was taped shut.

    "If only they knew my plan." i thought while looking at the crack in the door. "They have NO idea"

    James smirks at me. "That's what I thought"he said with a giggle in his tone.

    I breath into the tape until it falls off. "I don't like you" I snapped. "You are just a big dickhead." i said. "If you really do think you are gonna get away with this..you are SO wrong."

    James scowled and left and locked the door leaving Andrew. He was just staring at me. "What do you want Andrew?" i said as we locked eyes.

    To avoid akwardness I play with a lose thread on my shirt. Still looking down "You know he's gonna kill you..right?" i said calmly. "He just uses you...he has a twisted mind..he doesn't want you..not at all" i looked up.


    Andrew's face turn white. He could have been labeled as a vampire. Andrew scurried out of the room scared as hell.

    And that? Was the begining of my plan.
     
  10. OMGZ LITTLE GIRL YOU WILL UPDATE NOW! please?
     
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  12. I will when i can O_O
     
  13. BUMP!!! I will kill u in cc if u dont-___-!!!!!!
     
  14. UPDATE!
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    Back to Hilda's POV
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    I'm thirsty..of so thirsty. My mouth is like sandpaper. Not to mention my stomach..how hungry I am. It is dark out. I can hear to hoots of the owls.

    "Is it past 10 yet?" i whisper.

    Just as I finish that sentence James door barges open.

    "HUNGRY?!" James yelled.

    "Actually..yea I am..and quite thirsty." i said calmy.

    "Here. is. Your. Slo-dinner" James said followed by laughter.

    He set it on the cold metal table. I look at it.

    "Oh! Yum!! Slop! My favorite!"i said laughing. I jump onto the cold table..the coldness sends a shiver threw my body.

    I started devouring the slop like it was the first time i ate food. Then i felt his eyes beating me down.

    "Do you mind?" i said inbetween sips of water. "When people watch me eat it makes me feel uncomfortable." i said as I took another bite.

    James didn't move. "I'm done!" i threw the left over food at James.

    "GAH!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU B*TCH!!!" He ran out of the room leaving the door wide open.

    I was quick to the door. I dropped to my knees so I wouldn't be that noticable. I was crawling threw the door about 5 feet away.

    When I hear a guns click.
     
  15. OH YAY EVEN WHEN IM IN DANGER IMMA BAD ASS
     
  16. Hey Kristen

    "Knock
    Knock"

    "Who's there?"

    "Good"

    "Good who"

    "Good story"

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  17. UPDATE? YES IT'D DOWN THERE!

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    I stop dead in my tracks. I ever so slowly turn my head and see Andrew. Pointing the gun straight at me. I start crawling back.

    "Where you think your going?!" Yelled at me with a angry tone.

    "Well! I was going to find James to tell him he left the door open..but you found me first! So now I'm going back!"

    Andrew laughs. "SURE YOU WERE!"

    He follows my every move.

    Then...i make eye contact with Angi. She mouthed "Calm down..i got this shit handeled"

    I smiled and kept crawling. "She always does." i thought

    "Andrew!" i said "Hm?" he answered "Can i go to the bathroom?"

    Luckily for me the bathroom was connected to Angi's room. So i turned and crawled into Angi's room and crawled into the bathroom.

    "I will back in 5 minutes!" andrew said as he charged off

    I cracked to door open and started to talking to Angi.

    "Alright so here's the plan..."