That Girl. 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Tormentor_person (01), Oct 19, 2012.

  1. Going to finally create a story without love! Im going to try even if i fail! >:3

    This first update is going to be pretty short cause im still brainstorming ideas and im pretty destracted cause my dog George is nomming on my feet... 
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    Chapter 1: Wishing I was Invisible...


    Monday... The worst day of the week and i have to get up at 6AM... But i awakened myself and brushed my fingers through my glossy long black hair that was messed around my face. I went into my bathroom and looked in the mirror. I muttered to myself: "God... Such an ugly *****." I grabbed my brush and dragged it through my hair actually making myself cry because it have knots in it. I had to look in the mirror yet again to put on my black eyeliner, mascara, black eyeshadow and purple lipstick. I applied it all very thickly. I could've used white make up for my skin colour but i was already pale as a cotton wool pad! I went back into my bedroom and shoved on my usual, Black top with red patches, black toght skirt and black leggings, heavy black boots and deep purple hair extentions. I got all my **** together and ran out the house –without my breakfast and nothing of a goodbye– to catch the bus.

    I almost missed the bus but I just made it by seconds... To be honest i wouldnt care if I missed it or not. Everyone hates me, not because I have done something to them or anything... Its just because im the goth kid. I
     
  2. This is good, just fix some stuff like your paragraphs, make em shorter  but great start so far 
     
  3. This is a failure...  I never sent this... Look at the other one please... 
     
  4. Look at the one made at ten to... /).-) or the one thats later made than this one 
     
  5. Lol okay hahahaha