I'm going to be damn honest. OP, it does suck. It lacks character development, sounds like it's written by a 5 year old, lacks description, run-on sentences, bad grammar, lack of punctuation and capitalization, numerous spelling mistakes. You can't even capture the emotions of the characters as they look like they don't even have any. You can't even capture the feeling of being partly deaf. You don't even UNDERSTAND.
Just because you are doesn't mean you understand. Do your research before writing on such a touchy topic. At least.
" My wife Gwen and I are talking with the doctor. It's getting awfully close to the due date so we're doing some last minute check ups. So after a couple of minutes she starts to speak. Gwen: "Is he gonna turn out more like me, or his father?" I was puzzled. Stricken with confusion. Does she mean is he going to turn out tall or is she hung up on the fact that I have partial deafness, and that it runs in my family..." This would've been better it's more descriptive and it stays in one pov. 2 pov's can become distracting to a reader. Read this and re update your story if you want it to be good, to seem more interesting. You don't have to take it if you don't want it. I'm just trying to help you.......
Why do you even bother writing? I've read the start of some of your stories and to be honest, they're bad - really bad. Learn how to write before coming on here. It's not hard. I'm sick and tired of reading absolute crap of here. Where's the substance people? That's my opinion, pure and simple.