 One Way Love 

Okay this is my first story on here  I would love some constructive criticism 



~Prologue~

This is a very simple story everyone has heard has a kid...A story of a Princess and Knight that has been handed down for as long as anyone can remember...A beautiful Princess, the Demon King who kidnaps the Princess and the one who protects the Princess, the Noble Knight of every story. The Demon King has kidnapped the Princess countless times. But every time, the Knight would always come to save her. No matter what tricks and ploys the Demon King uses. Nothing can stop the Knight from saving his Princess. But what if the Knight was a modern day girl? What if the Princess is another modern day girl who isn't in love with the Knight? And what if the Demon King is the Princess's boyfriend? But still the Knight would save the Princess no matter what. The Knight would withstand the harshness of the Princess and the Demon King just for the sake of her Princess. This is a very simple story, A beautiful Princess, the Demon King who kidnaps the Princess and the one who protects the Princess, the Noble Knight of every story. But in this story, there is a twist that takes place because after all we would get tired of hearing the same thing over and over again.

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Hoped you guys enjoyed the Prologue 

 

Oops spelled as wrong in the first line. That's supposed to 'as' not 'has'

 

Thanks  I will but not right now 

 

Thank you  I'm working on the first Chapter right now so be patient with me 

 

Here's the update 

~Chapter 1~

I walked through the halls of the high school in a dazed. I looked up and saw Miranda standing with the popular kids, laughing at something one of them said. I walked passed them ignoring the feeling of pain in my heart and accidentally bumped into one of the girls. The girl looked back from her laughing and glared at me with eyes that could kill. "Watch where you're going weirdo." The girl growled. All of the popular kids looked over at us and glared at me with hate in their eyes. But all I noticed was Miranda looking at me even if it was only from pure hatred, my heart still skipped a beat. "Yeah Loser, you could have infected us with your loser genes." One of the boys insulted with a smug smile on his face. Miranda and everyone else laughed at his insult and sneered at me. I slowly walked away from them but glanced at Miranda once more before I left.
I sat down on my seat in the very back near the window and looked outside. I stared the huge Oak tree in front of the school and the perfectly groomed lawn. I jumped slightly as the bell rang indicating that it was time for class. I looked over at the door the same time Miranda walked into the class and sat at the seat beside mine. She glared at me as she sat down and turned around to talk to her friends. A substitute walked into the class and told us we could have free time. I got out my sketchbook and starts to slowly sketch the scene outside the window, I start to get lost in my sketch not noticing the popular kids looking at me with smirks on their faces.
After long minutes of sketching I finished up the picture and stared at it, the sketch looked exactly like the outside scene. I felt someone looking over my shoulder and turned around and came faced to faced with Miranda, she was looking at me with wide eyes.

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Miranda was looking at her?  What will ever happen next?

 

Haha I'm so evil 

 

I'm leaving cliff hangers for every chapter 